A perfect work of art, very descriptive and impressive Grammer usage ? ?????short and concise loved it!an instant five stars for me!
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This actually will be my 1st time writing a review for a book, so pls forgive my shortcomings. Anyways this book is masterpiece, I'm currently at ch205 so I know want I'm saying. It puts all other post-apocalyptic novels I've read to shame.The mc is highly observant and adaptable, I won't outright call him an antihero but more of a free spirited person who would stop at nothing to protect his interests and those he cares about.The author breathes life into the characters by proving time and time again that there's more to them than just occupying spots in the story, even the thoughts of mob characters are fleshed out and easily related to.The world building is steadily progressing, I believe at the end of the novel it would have no words to describe it.PS. I didn't directly talk about events that occur to avoid spoilers#Lilith supremacy
I had a whole proper review written out for this but decided to just backspace all of it away. I'm going to say what I want here, not as a review, but as advice.Firstly, where's the synopsis? The only reason I clicked on this was that the title pretty much said it all, but without a decent synopsis, lots of people are just going to skim past it.Your writing style is confusing and could use some work. The best advice I can give is for you to read some of the well-known stories on this platform and take note of how they do certain things, such as how exactly the character speak and what the follow-up text is for it, the rough estimate length of a paragraph, the background of characters, and so forth.The formatting could use some work. The "paragraphs" are far too long.Additional information should go to the additional information section, not in the middle of a chapter. That's the biggest problem of this story so far. Work a bit more on the characters as well. Like, make a character sheet of every character and give them like 20 characteristics, traits, abilities, personality types, etc that make them unique. Don't introduce most of these traits into the story directly, but rather take a roundabout approach. An example of a fairly well-structured paragraph with decent vocabulary that helps portray some of the characteristics of Zach:'Despite Zach's prior fear when he learned about the foundation kidnapping him, a blooming sense of excitement welled up from his' depths after realizing where exactly he was; Inside of the very SCP Foundation that he respected! The idea of being able to use his omniscient-like knowledge to explore The Foundation would have been a rather thrilling one if only the guards weren't holding him at gunpoint; His anxiety well on its way back to cloud his judgment once again.' Other than those main pointers, there are a few things here and there that could use working on, but they aren't detrimental to the story. Just focus on getting a better writing style and fixing the formatting first.~Some guy who cried after reading SCP-1762.
Honestly this isn't even that badBUTThe MC is a transmigrator who started his second life at age 5, in a modern world 99% similar to his old one and he is still a dead beat nobody until the cheat arrives. There are even the same or very similar companies and the same market crashes.I am sorry, but why is the MC still so low, I mean, if you had the education of even just a high school student at age 5 why can't you achieve something with your life. There are literally hundreds of scholarships offered to young people with such potential, just choose a field and take one, it is not like you have to pay that money back if you fail later on.Or invest your pocket change in krypto currency.This novel has 4 major flaws:1 It says the MC has transmigrated but does not take that into account except to steal stupid business ideas from the other world.2 The MC has literally no character development from age 5 to start of this novel. It is like he has just appeared in that world instead of living there for years.3 The MC is at most avarage IQ and very low EQ, even after 2 lifetimes. He is stagnant and not suitable for active management. Picking a random noob from the street would have been more interesting.4 Everything about business and management is just hand waved away, if it doesn't serve the authors vision. This story is meant to be realistic but in truth is badly disguised wish fulfillment.
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Pretty much garbage. kiling machine mc. It is very hard to say anything good about this novel after reading 20 chspters. I like eastern novel but this novel is not a good one.
not a romantic story but a investigation story.first we think it is a harrem but after reading 150 chapter there is only one girl until now.good read
ps: author is a kind of racist .when it comes to crual mass murder cases most of villians comming from Japan, us, or some other countries .only good villians like revenge for raped daughter / gf is Chinese. you feel disgust while if you are from other countries especially us ,Japan , Taiwan etc
raw link plz
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Sign in for a Millennium, How Do I Hide My Ancestors
Sign in for a Millennium, How Do I Hide My Ancestors
Sign in for a Millennium, How Do I Hide My Ancestors