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the beginning is pretty bad, you have no idea what is happening, the mind picture is unclear, overall bad beginning
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It starts off in a way you know it'll be complex but it's a really good book, it's obvious that the Author put in a lot of work in it. Not to put out any spoilers I'll advice you to try a couple chapters and trust me when I say you'll be hooked.
All you need do is read 1st chapter and you will know that this is a "Traditional" Chinese novel .
- plagiarism ✔️
- Racism ✔️
- Stupidity ✔️
- Cliche System ✔️
P.S. i didn't give this novel 1 star because my review will be deleted.
i love this kind of story, the plot and twist is good. just hoping that this will be finished. i really like your writing style. even the sequencing of events from TAP until here in GNG.
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Synopsis hooked me
The story has potential!
The plot is conventional and well-developed though the author will need to distinguish their story through exploring the world background a bit more, offering more insight to the characters and taking up the writing quality by a notch.
The grammar and writing quality was fine for the most part except some awkward phrasing and the occasional grammar mistake.
In the first few chapters, the story also has a problem with long paragraphs that need to be broken down into smaller ones to make it more digestible to mobile readers.
Keep up the good work!
Overall the writing quality, update frequency, story development, characters and world back ground are excellent. The best way to describe this webnovel is fun. Brilliantly paced, everytime you get a little frustrated with the MCs naive personality his character would progress. The charaters are funny and interesting, you can’t but help laughing. The plot is overall simple so far, though that makes a part of the charm. The foreshadowing leaves that anticipation for an amazing chapter which leads you to impatiently waiting for the next release. Power of shepherds is both awesome yet so entertaining. Expect to laugh at the power but secretly admire its power. I both wanted to binge read and leave some chapters to read because each one was consistently entertaining. I went with the former and now regret not having anything left to read! PS - there are some chapters that might play with your heart strings - eg. MC loses his innocent view of the world. Make sure to bring tissues, youve been warned !PPS - Silliest thing i did was leave this in my “to read” list for a month. Lesson learnt!
real synopsis1st it's a like bait there ain't a thing about Summoned beats the profession is nothing near typical summoner it's more of a different ability type profession like mind readers ,telepathy , future sight(works like Google Earth) etc then each ability has to merge with some bead which if successful he lives if not then head explodes and there's 2 more beads to merge with,2nd quite a lot Chinese culture glorification and Nationalism like how some eunich ma discovered American continent and Japan etc countries and how Chinese invented fire which is a bless to rest of the world from them 3rd the whole novel is based of Chinese mythologies so again will be a lot of glorification in future last utterly disappointed in this novel I came for summoner/summoned beasts contract pets sigh but this novel has nothing to do with the word summoner
what a beautiful story. I am sincerely impressed.Tobi makes me want to keep reading. I want to know what happens to him and how he will live as a demon. so much curiousity. please more updates and more beautiful stories like this.
The story has a lot of potential and I must say I enjoyed reading the first few chapters. Keep up the good work. I really enjoyed your novel I hope you continue this wonderful novel until the end