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It is a dull story though interesting. The book is well started and written in a flow. The characters, the plot, the development is all wonderful!
Am sincerely waiting to read further!!!
Dude, you continuously repeated yourself to the point I could read past chapter 10.
Wow this novel is really good and I also love the world building and idea development of this book. keep it up author
So for people who are interested in magnus like stories this is for you because while it takes a while it is not slow and every chapter is a development and the world building is logical and does not seem forced at all while the main character is more of an anti hero or even a villain but in a realistic manner not a villain just for the sake of being one and is not stuck to his human identity
Long story short I highly recommend this novel and for people who enjoy this type of story it is a well crafted master piece
Good is fun and interesting, I have read some of this authors other work and it is somewhat similar to that.Anyone know what character the title picture is supposed to be? Wondering for research purposes ;)
I usually don't write these unless the story deserves it. this story is the best I've read in a really long time. the characters have growth, not unnatural relationships, and just are fun to read about. the j fo dumps are natural. they don't leave you wishing to skip ahead. the world is amazing. as a fan if mythology,specifically Greek, I can't find a better book. the author does amazing work portraying a different vibe with the goddess Nyx. I honestly can't wait to read how this mother figure in his life held him get past his somehow deep trauma. his family, sister and aisha, treat him like a family would. the story is well written, nothing unnatural. I can't wait to see how he handles bianca and Anna. author you will keep getting my coins and votes. keep it up!!
I am at ch 38 and so far so good .I always find it weird that almost every novel has a male protagonist and women are damsel in distresses who can‘t do a thing. Thats the reason I’m hyped for this story and so far the world building and characters are pretty interesting. One of my concerns is that she gets overpowered too quickly so I hope her progress gets a little slower. Love to see more .
hope author gets well soon
I have a question. I remember that a ling time ago in the trial read, there was a book in which the MC had a book where he could write down answers and they would become correct. Does anyone remember its name.
A well writen story so far. Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
As of chapter 47
Writing Quality: 4/5
Some spelling and grammer mistakes throughout the story. However this does not spoil the story and can be easily understood despite the minor mistakes.
Story Development: 5/5
Despite only being 47 chapters so far, the story development is interesting. The fact that the author plays the role of VR extremely prominently is nice, but it would be more interesting if the MC backstory was shown as well. The battle scenes are done really well in this novel. The fact that the intro of the game (trailer) gave the storyline a strong foothold is interesting as other authors tend to not use such things. This is very unique to this story so i give the author props for implementing this unique dynamic.
Character Design: 4/5
This takes into account that the novel is only 47 chapters long so far. There is little background information on the MC. How well to do his family is, etc. (there is some information but not alot). The side characters are not really evident at this point besides the female lead (potential love interest). Only some names are being thrown around here and there without any interesting or distinct facts about them.
Updating Stability: 5/5
I do not know the stability of the update as I read all 47 chapters in a day. I just place 5/5 as I consider it stable until further notice.
World Background: 5/5
The trialer of the game provided a good base for the VR world background. This is done better than most other novels. However, since this is a relatively new novel, there is a lot of room for world background expansion. I hooe the author can continue on this path as the expanaion of the world's background is exoanding at a nice pace.
Overall: 4.6/5
The story is really interesting and one that I will continue to follow. This is one of the better newer novels on this site. I think people should pick this up to read at least until this point. The MC can be considered overpowered in some manner (compared to other players), but the content is still really interesting. Hope the author continues to work hard on this novel