Website : qidian china
Views : 10.06million
Rating : 9.0(377)
Chapters : 870+
Status : ongoing
Word count : 2.36million
author level : great
No of works : 2
Disscussion : 20350
Year started : 2017
Chinese title : 白银霸主
Previous work : castle of black iron
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Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender.
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this Is what I want when I say I wanna read something unique
author all the best I am looking forward to your work thanks for writing this awesome piece of novel
The author is not an ordinary one....he has above average writing skills and writings. Also what I liked the most was his concept and Idea which has huge potential. The plot is niche and some moments made me feel my emotions in which I didn't feel for a moment in reading novels. Also, my only advice is to show more than tell. Other than that, well you are good to go! hehe
it takes to chapter 9 for you to actually get a plot like where he starts to move and it's not just system notifications and even then it's still not a lot of the story it's very slow and it's kind of annoying I almost describe it as a slow burn for the action because there is none it's his servants talking behind his back and him getting points for it like I don't know how long it takes before he starts to fight back
Of course I love harem novels, well, when the author makes a strong ms nayvny, it's boring (it's strange that a person has gone back to the past and is thinking about a sub-job, it already makes you wonder if it's worth reading)it's like Japanese nubo novels full of cliches. Little has been read , only 10 chapters , well , I already see the cliche of the feeble - minded ms .
Evil mc, rational, benefit oriented, meticulous, cunning, no poison, no romance, no harem, goal of immortality, loner mc.
Well i am not really into sci fi genre but this book has made a mixture of both, but as i said i cannot really judge it form a sci fi point of view.
Amazing novel keep up the good work..
No harem please also try getting someone to proofread for you.............................................................................................................................. ......
The Raw passion of the author was visible in every word. But his grasp on grammar and the writing method is what undoes his efforts. But it seems like the author is learning and improving.
But unfortunately the author needs (I don't have any authority to say this) to rewrite or revamp the novel a little bit.
Story and concept wise, it's cool and has a lot of potential, so I really hope the author succeeds in his first novel.
Interesting premise already for a book that's just starting.
ML stories aren't always my cup of tea but I quite like this one so far. An MC who holds a dark system yet doesn't seem to be an antihero or at least.... not yet