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I just finished publishing the first 5 chapters. This is my first time writing a novel so I hope you like it. The premisse is really simple and you can know this by the title. The purpose of this novel is to relate the days and a slice of the MC's life as an ordinary person in a ordinary world, showing his thoughts and emotions. You may see some grammar errors.
If you are enjoying the novel I would appreciate if you do comments or reviews.
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The story was very good and the character design is awesome ,it is very hard to translate the story but with a lot of effort you made it .my small request is to make the story some more interesting and attractive so the people will still get attached to the story . Hope you will make it ????
Face slapping, harem, and not a single person with an iq above the double digits. I dont recommend if you want to keep your sanity.
As requested by author , dropping a 5 star review. Please keep it up and dont drop this! I am waiting for to see how this goes ...........................
Overall, this story is miles apart from LOTM or RI, but I really liked this story for its novelty. I hope more chapters gets translated in the future as this story has a lot of potential for further developement.For people who finds this boring, I think it really all comes down to one's own personal preferences. It may be true that the mc is really lacking personality-wise, but all I really want is an mc who strives to get stronger, by hook or crook.Either way, as of now, this story is much better than your general wuxia/xianxia/xuanhuan stuff out there. A 4/5 for me.
Fun but the translation is garbage
After i read a few chapters i really like your story. your theme really got me interested to read more chapters. but if i can critique your book, there are some misspellings in terms of punctuation. I hope that in the future it will be better
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The synopsis reports that it has swords and gunfire. It is extremely likely that the author wants to reach both sword and magic and developing world audiences. Usually an author who starts a work fishing for the public doesn't have a good story in mind and they build without a good foundation. The story that starts without a basis doesn't get very far, and it's very likely that it uses plagiarism blatantly creating a narrative monster all poorly stitched.
Not bad but also not good.