Lightning immortal

When I read the synopsis I was pretty impressed. So many information and events in just a few lines, so I thought if I could really get what you want to say on this novel, but when I started the first episode it made me laugh, and I think it's a really good thing! because I understood what style of writing you have and it's very fresh,
Keep going!

I don't even know how to find good original novels anymore (the rating score is always misleading), it's like climbing an arduous journey through extremely trash grammar 50% of the time.   

Normally I'd do an in-depth review on why I don't like a certain novel, but this novel is pretty self-explanatory.

Writing Quality: 1.5/5 (My eyes are bleeding)
Stability Of Updates: 5/5 (I'll give you this)
Story Development: 2/5 (MC has a very steep learning curve)
Character Design: 2/5 (Look one line above)
World Background: 3/5 (Well, there's a world and it's not too bad, I can faintly picture an image.)

If anyone wants me to do an in-depth review, simply @reply to me in one of my reviews and I'll do a truthful in-depth review if I can actually understand the flow of the writing. (I write these reviews so that the section for determining whether someone reads a story is actually truthful and not full of deceit.)

As the author of this novel i thank you for reading my novel , i hope that all of you will like this novel .
I will try my best to improve.

Ok I'm confused is this mc brain dead or he's to arrogant he claims to read novels in his past life but this is the dumbest he's been I mean what mc have acted like this well his personality needs a little work I mean he has two lighting in him but I don't remember a system or artifact  a artifact would be a good twist well thank you for for the good work

This Novel is awesome it's mainly comedy but not in the over-the-top way
I highly recommend you read it and I hope the author continue the story even if he doesn't it's worth a read

Our dearly beloved protagonist is a hilarious and talented young master. His tolerance and determination knows no limits
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