Hello! I think you need to add more description of your main three heroes early on like in the first chapter, or all the characters for that matter besides the minor ones. Otherwise the story is well written, just needs some minor editing.
I couldn't be happier finding this book, a wonderful break from typical cultivation stories. Bai Lung is a "villain" in all senses of the word, but he is our villain. There is no cookie cutter, type casting here, the MC displays forethought and intelligence to rival the "Heroes." I am more than excited to see where this story goes! Long live our glorious basatard!
A great story in the first 100 chapters, boring in the next 200 chapters,
unbearable from chapter 400. No perspective and depth, repetitive and monotonous development...
it all boils down to ... slap in the face... slap in the face... repeated jokes...
Holy crap this is good, so good that it keeps the end of my hair stand up. The author really tries to draw you in, like you were actually inside the novel. The tingling sensation I have every night when I read this book is amazing, it is like you were actually watching it, it is so descriptive that in my imagination it's like a run through of everything coming in and out. The story starts of with him being alone and owning a haunted house when his parents disappeared, not really a spoiler when it's in the description. He suddenly realise that there was a black phone in the third floor of his haunted house. This black phone connected to his parents disappearence and also he can now do things to the haunted house like moving floors adding tools with the phone. He was also speculating how this works but was caught up when it gave him mission to leading his journey of finding his parents and building haunted house. It's so good I recommend ppl to read this because if you like thriller and horror and also read it at night, it gives you more tingling feeling in your body like there is someone with you
it's a fine story overall, even much better than some new story that has been released. this story doesn't deserve a one-star rating at all, if it doesn't suit your taste then you should just go ahead and get lost. i just hope it won't take long to update or i'd just discard this story too along with the others
Its better than most novels on here but I would not call it a masterpiece. The writing is ok but nothing where I just want to keep reading. Its not immersive at all. I had to drop the novel at around Chapter 20 because reading the novel is just not engaging in my opinion.
Kind of feeling bad to give this a negative review because you can see that the author put a lot of effort into his creation. But I just got bored. Its just not mine sorry.
I have read this novel at the obter website and i must say, it is by far the best webnovel i have read so far in qidian that brings the most of the real human nature in us, i Also must say that it has an amazyng character development until chapter 249 together with an slow but really good cultivation and world bulding, it is a novel with a dark theme just like reverend insanity but doesnt Goes that deep in the dark, it doenst need To, and because of that i believe more people Will read it, there is romance, Hatred, betrail, felling of being lost as well as hope and in my opnion a really good plot twist until chapter 249 that is the end of volume one, To all boys and girls i recomend giving a shot until chapter 249 Before rating it because i may be wrong hahaha, but it doesnt matter, if you are going To read i ask you To have the patience To read until chapter 249 and sorte for my spelling mistakes i dont have inglish as main language
It's a good book so far I enjoy it keep up the good work author.
Personally I love this kind of novel and this kind of talent/system, if I have one complaint/suggestion it would be to change the names of the ranks so that they don’t sound so similar but other than that I look forward to reading more of this in the future.[img=update]
It’s seem to me, it’s copy from Korean manhwa “Auto hunting with my clones”
How is this a romance novel? MC visits a prositute in like immediately the next chapter.
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If you like History's Strongest Senior Brother, then this one is for you. If you didn't like it because it was too much wikipedia info dump about every single stupid thing, then like me, you won't like it. It's a complete chore to read and I'll only read it when I've grown tired of poking my eyes out for the day.