I've read over 400 Chapters and I can say, this is one of my most satisfying reads...continue cultivating and keep a low profile!
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everything was good then his friend appeared and I dropped it
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A very good translation done too much efforts have been taken instead of giving the author bad comments we must give him good comments as he tried his best. I agree with you Priyanshi
I quit after reading 150 chapters on mtl novel, no character development at all. It gets repetitive after that. I won't recommend it. You guys can give it a try
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It’s fun to read, has a steady pace and is very well written. It took me a second to understand the title which made it funnier. It’s not for everyone but it is nice… fun actually. It should be read. Well done author.
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This was one of the best books i have ever read and i hope the author keeps on doing stuff like this great writing, awesome storyline all in all incredible hreat job
This novel is very good story and very hard to find. I was lucky to accidentally find it.
A few bits of information if you even want to proceed with reading this novel :
(-) MC is slow to adapt and he is a “wimp”, meaning if you came here for an actual villain this isn’t the novel you want or if you came here for an intelligent and calculating MC also do not read this book
(+) The premise of the story is interesting where you get this fantasy world with Gods, Adventurers (Players), Classic ranking systems like Silver, Gold, Platinum
(*) The characters are decent, the novel is set in first person and thus heavily relies on dialogue and interactions for you to know more about them which unfortunately means World Background takes a few points off despite an interesting setting due to the fact that it is strictly first person with lack of early-novel exploration events
(*) Writing quality is decent for a webnovel nothing much to say though the main issues are typos which isn’t that bad
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Writing Quality : 3.5/5 nothing crazy but not horrible
Updating Stability : 5/5 its still updating with a good amount of chapters to read
[Slow-Paced] Story Development : 3/5 its ok, the MC does get around to doing things but its nothing much and at the moment hes still within the starter area
Character Design : 3/5 not a personal fan of the MC but it does make for more “danger” when it comes to him going out
World Background : 4/5 unexplored for the most part but has a lot of potential
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Tips for the author :
- It helps to switch between the MC and the people he has interacted with in order to develop characters and the world more easily and it also lets us take a break from prolonged firstperson view which can be exhausting and boring to read
- Fix typos
- Lots of world potential and character potential so capitalize on it
Same clinche poor Mc's family, struggling mc and his sister. Mc tries to give his sister a good life. But I got enough with it.
The starting of the story is so boring. You could have cut that part but you still made the tragic story that was not logical for me.
Sorry, I don't want to know further.