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So far it is good...........................................................................................................................
I find it stupid that people try to take this novel seriously and rate and review it. NO! What you're really here for is to read this god send novel full of incest, harem and a **** ton of sexs.
Follow my lead brothers and stop pretending you hate it. Stop pretending to give bad reviews, afraid of others judging you. I say fk them. We all know that were horney fucks, we need materials and this god send novel supplys it, i wont lie i even couldn't make it past the chapter he fucks his mum cuz im to weak. I'll go into closed doors cultivation and return when im stronger. Atleast i know my limit and never give up unlike you bitches that run from the beginning. If you like it the say so, if not the quietly leave the room so my other brothers can come in. We ain't looking for good plot or character development, we just one the MATERIALS. Sigh if only the old hentai haven was still here i wouldn't have fallen this far.
It is great and has a lot of potential like infinite Potential!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
As a woman i dont read novels where the MC is (m) i prefer women but this one got me so hooked on the first chapters and i only rate writing quality and character design for now i still need more chapters before rating world background but my opinion is that author is very good at making you imagine his scenes without trying its really good so far
Seems to be another cliche 'system novel'. What's worst that its a talking system which is basically mc's master or mistress in this case. With the whole mission feature of the system, it can order around the mc with rewards like a dog, which the mc will not refuse as the rewards are just too good. Its, slavery but mc just doesn't know it.
alright I have lots of reason why I rate this story below 3 star but im gonna save another poor soul before they read this story so1. Author decide to make MC aka Lucifer Stupid & did more stupid stuff in order to expand word count, some problem could easily be solve in few paragraph but nope author decide to make mc did stupid stuff in order to increase the word count like directly hacking SHIELD & get himself interrogate while he could simply use his other identity to solve his problem including lucifer bootlicking Tony stark because he didn't want to build his own connection.2. Author Strictly would never ever let mc do some drastic action & make sure the story line strictly follow the cannon making this story a self insert rewrite wish fulfillment novel, no idea whether there'll be Harem since I drop this story.3. Author way too underestimate the infinte stone of MCU.
it's confusing from the start I don't know what I am reading why does the mc know things he never heard of before I'm confused at least give explanation in the end like it's unique. but gives up understanding for the new readers I feel like I'm hearing words nót sentences but words
As of this review, 36 chapters have been published. Writing quality—quite good. Some grammatical mistakes here and there but nothing too distracting. A little clean up will do the trick. In terms of flow... wow. There wasn’t a moment where I wasn’t sucked into this story. The story switches between the first POV of the main protagonist, the self-proclaimed Demon Lord and Magic King Rupert, and the third POV of the people he had chosen to include in his grand plot. Both point-of-views were fun and entertaining, and I found that there was never a boring moment in either of these POVs. The story centres around an ex-magical-overlord-turned-filthy-rich-businessman named Rupert Hargreaves, who, after being reincarnated into a different world, finds life to be a tad too boring for his diabolic, mystical tastes. In order to satiate his boredom, he indulges himself into the world of fictional entertainment (and the internet)—especially anime. Soon after, he brings his hobbies into the real world and began an anime-esque experiment/production in real life involving real people with his equally twisted deadpanned secretary, Alice Kang. The overall premise of the story is similar to that of ‘To Be a Power in the Shadows!’ or ‘There Was No Secret Organization to Fight with the World’s Darkness so I Made One (In Exasperation)’. It is a story of a guy who is both bored enough and powerful enough to create a whole fantasy just because he could. In my honest opinion, this kind of plot is fun but hard to execute as the scale is quite large. On top of juggling between several protagonists in different settings, one would also need to make coherent ‘pulling-things-from-behind-the-scenes’ plans that doesn’t rely too much on Deus Ex Machina... or maybe just heap it on so that the humans will actually survive until the (obviously planned but shh) Last Boss battle... lol. In any case, it is advisable for the author to take caution in writing the story as it is easy to derail and make it tedious and boring to read. Last but not least, my favourite part about this story—which I didn’t realise until more than a few chapters in—was the fact that this story involved a lot of queer characters. Also, the Uyghur girl? I have no choice but to stan.All in all, this was a very enjoyable read and I look forward to more! Good work, author!
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First three chapters named prelude show MC being a spiteful youth, seem to have upset other readers. However main story starts after this and he’s now calmer but still devious.Background settings of the story appears to be some derivative of the Heroes of Might and Magic universe.
novel quite good, and i will support the author who is working on this noveli hope the author had a good day and for the people who are looking at the review hoping this novel is goodi recommend reading it guys it's super good of a novel