brother it's a very good novel just upload frequently and beware of copyright issue as we have recently seen what happened when "the rise of Australia" (banned on web novel) when it became popular. show us a good time for the first time I have seen a proper edited novel on India. And you can gather information and plot building aspects from the above mentioned novel and the tyrant of steel, it's a good novel. Thank you for giving a new start to Indian rise novels.
it's awesome and portrays a picture of the society.
Is this the author’s novice work?
Author stop trying to add the need to be ethical in the MC's personality, we're not children,we understand that humans are selfish and are driven by ambition,cause at this point it's almost as tho you try label everyone the MC goes up against as 'evil',no is evil,people just have conflicting interests,other than this there's not much to complain about,keep up the good work?
The story is good til now but we're still real early on so it could change for the worse or become even better, The characters are really good especially the MC, The Smut scenes are Okey "could be better"but overall til now it's been a very good read, i would definitely give it a try.
Awesome plot, although not finished. The beginning of the plot is great as well.
Pretty meh. It was cool at first, but it became long winded. The first bank robbery scene lasts basically 15 chapters or so. Way too long imo. I got bored when nothing was happening. They just kept exaggerating how ferocious he looked or whatever. Boring
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this is interesting idea nowadays, hope this novel get picked up by the team.
really hoping so tho
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Luke/Night's character is pretty relatable. The way the story prolongs is at a good pace and as a novice writer, the concept and the arc of the story is very fascinating.
The story is intriguing and the world background is well designed. The story development is smooth. I hope to read many more chapters in the future. Happy writing!
I think the review s are purchased because this is hard to follow and needs fast pass very early on in a better book I've seen people rage about that but not on this one.