Good story. I love how you gave the time for the readers to know more about the MC and not jump into the excitement immediately. I absolutely have no problem with that. Writing quality is also good, 5/5. Character design and world background are some that I want to compliment. Keep it up and good job with this superb story, author!
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Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact
[email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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Why are all the updates being released as privileged after chapter 69? Atleast release 1-2 chapters daily for those who are unprivileged. Or give a note for when you will update chapters for common users
I'm gonna give it 5 stars just for promotion. This book's got a nice feel to it(I think?), and it's got interesting twists. It has nice grammar and imagery too so for those who wanna take a break from fantasy, waste your time here. It's up to tastes whether your time was worth it
this novel is good i hope this will be chosen i will really support this and i hope this will be develop a good story alonv the waynd not derail to a worse one.
BAD VERY BAD. The Author might as well make his dead daughter the MC because she is the only one with the ideas it seems. Youd think after translating 200 chapters for PREMIUM use the translation would get better but instead it seems a little worse
Girls Love is very often written in weird and uncomfortable ways whenever i’ve seen it portrayed in web novels, like having the MC be a man who turned into a woman—but the romance in SFO is cute, casual and the emotions feel realistic, which is what i enjoy most about this novel so far.although it’s somewhat new, i’m enjoying the story a lot, especially because of some of the concepts that seem to be not thought about/avoided in novels of the same genre. maybe i haven’t read enough of them, but it seems like most other VR-game novels never have game updates (as if they are made perfect from launch) which doesn’t really make much sense.moving on from that, the game seems relatively realistic in terms of player enjoyment so far, which is another positive. the players being able to do what they want, like crafting, gathering or PKing, seems more fun in my opinion, and i like that the MC is able to go on her own journey without being forced into specific main quests or something like that.overall, i’m very interested to see where SFO goes and can’t wait to see more of yuki&trisha. this was my first ever review, thanks for reading it ^__^