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The Adventurer System

The Adventurer System
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Genres:
GamesAdventureAction
Tags:
System Adventure Cultivation Action Videogame Overpowered Evolution
Novel Info
  • Author:
  • Jigx
  • Status:Ongoing

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Entry for #webnovelspirityawards2021
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It was the first VRMMORPG that successfully operated in the other world which was mostly known as the "VR World." It allowed the people to restarts their life to could escape from the inevitable change of the real world.

"Yumiko Gritz" our protagonist that suffered from Paraplegia after he fought in the Taekwondo World Cup. His opponent "Drake" Schemed to brutally assault him, so he couldn't back again inside the ring.

Her sister "Amiya Gritz" his a supportive sister also that the person who Introduced a game to him Where he could use his limbs without any problems.

Living in another world beyond your expectations, it possible to change your perception in the real world? Let's join in my journey to become the greatest adventurer in the VR World.

- Tags

VR World, Solo-Adventurer, War, Romance, Dungeon, Monsters, Romance?, Magic world.

Photo, not mine. I just found it on google.

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FanficismyheavenL64's avatar
August 21,2023
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Troxking6L7's avatar
August 21,2023
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I am very pleased to see such an amazing novel! It was so good that I didn't know that I have already read a few chapters! The characters were very lifelike and realistic. With emotions to let us see their character. The plot was steadily building up and it was nice! The worldbuilding was vast and detailed. I like how you explain the nooks and crannies in your craft. Overall, It was easy to get lost in your novel as it was very immersive! I will wait for your work to reach a million views and that will be pleasing to the eyes! Kudos and good luck! Peace ✌️
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Nemesis_Ryzen's avatar
August 21,2023
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Very nice!
The chapters are nice and long, and full of great descriptive detail that makes this story a pleasure to read. I love the plot, especially with the idea of restarting a life after a tragedy has occurred. The characters are well fleshed out, though I would maybe like to see a bit more detail in their personality here and there.
I think the one thing the author needs to work on is being careful not to switch tenses. There were several occasions that the tenses shifted, and a few grammatical errors, but these can easily be fixed.
Great work author
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Yamatosan15's avatar
August 21,2023
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This story is hurt by poor grammar. There is a kernal of something interesting underneath, but it is difficult to get at it. The character seems very one-dimensional, so we're not really rooting for him so much as just sitting back and watching.
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TeLLertaLes's avatar
March 19,2022
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I'd like how the story goes on, the character development and the world building, and it always made me excited what will happen next. Thanks Author keep it up! we are always here your reader to support you!!!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Cultivator_AsuraPl's avatar
March 19,2022
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Hi, I'm the author of the adventurer system! Also, this is a shameless review.

first of all, I don't have much vocabulary so some words are repeated, but I guarantee you that I already made each arc of the story. I admitted that there are some grammatical issues, but don't blame me English is not my native language hahaha! I will try to fix it as soon as possible.

About Drake? All question has the answer, so stay tuned.

To the readers, read my work I hope you enjoy it, I'm really glad this is the reason why I keep writing, thank you!
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