Five stars all!! Even tho it has 0 Power Stones its still deserve 5 five stars for me
Hello author i glad it you always this novel.
I study in IT universitas, and like programing.
Hope you novel good always.
Hope MC not to bad, not to Silly.
Succes for your novel
Review at ch 69
The best part of this novel is the segs scenes, which are really hot and well written
Very descriptive
The writing is good but it's easy to see that the author doesn't have much experience with World building and character design
It's more like a wish fullfilmemt
The main women have a similar design with no unique character... It's more like they are a better fyc.k compared to other women
Nothing special
There is a sob story with each FMC and the MC gets 'over' emotional
Basically it's not relatable
All the villains and mobs are horni and wants to Fyc.k the FMC
Overall. .. This can't be considered as a novel but a segs story
Don't get me wrong, I'm not against it but I love it
@Author you need to give the characters more depth and the females need to have more personality
This would improve the quality of this work by a lot
-Translation Quality (4 Stars)
Translator clearly put more effort than the rest of other trial reads who just use ML translations. I would’ve given 5 stars if not for some terms being changed between chapters and some sentences that don’t make since since they’re just translated straight from the original Chinese version but it’s very much still readable
-Stability of Updates (5 stars)
Duh
-Story Development (4 stars)
I like the story thus far and it has shown promise to be a good novel in the future. The story is more down to earth with the main character being closer to a normal person with a father, mother and and extended family that he’s close to. Plus he’s not ridiculously untalented or talented and he’s not a transmigrator who knows absolutely nothing and he’s more of a person who has lived 17 years in his world. My only worry is that the author just rehashes the “a war has started and I need to do missions” when the MC enters uni. (Oh also there’s no nationalism until chapter 70 something cause that’s the farthest I’ve reached in the raws)
-Character Design (3 stars)
Very generic.
-World Background (3.5 stars)
I like how much information the author seems to give about the world however I would’ve liked it to be given more naturally and less through exposition (that sometimes feels like it doesn’t really matter) which will definitely put off a lot of people.
-Overall
I like this novel but it’s certainly not everyone’s cup of tea but I found significantly better than the rest of the trial reads this time around and obviously a whole lot better than some of the recent previous batches.
Heck yeah this novel is a little rough but in a good way I see that it has a lot of potential and I can see this going a lot of different ways but I hope the author does not go the (evil sect name but good actually path)
A good story to read .. it just that its a bit similar to RoTWRTW and Reincarnation of the strongest sword .. but all in all its good
Great novel. Have fun reading it. The author has done a good job as you wont find many mistakes while reading it. Theres a room for improvement though with the quality. I understand the author is Asian and not very good in English nonetheless. Good work.
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I’ve really enjoyed this story so far. The idea is creative and unique, plus I’ve been craving a nonhuman story for a while so I gave it a five star. I don’t really have any clear cut criticisms so I’ll just share my thoughts. Thankfully the author has said there would be no harem. I also hope there won’t be romance either since it seems like it would be out of place in a story like this, though I suppose it wouldn’t be completely unwelcome. My biggest concern is that the mc will become physically or mentally more “human”, so I’m praying the author doesn’t go in that direction like so many other stories have. I would like to elaborate on what I mean by “human” but I don’t think I could explain it well in words. I think it might be simpler to say that I hope the mc stays alien to all things human, in both body and mind.
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