A man who passed away and was reborn in the world of Cultivation with a unique system. The system grants him points for each woman he practices Dual Cultivation with, which he can use to purchase items from the system store to enhance his strength.
Review at ch 69
The best part of this novel is the segs scenes, which are really hot and well written
Very descriptive
The writing is good but it's easy to see that the author doesn't have much experience with World building and character design
It's more like a wish fullfilmemt
The main women have a similar design with no unique character... It's more like they are a better fyc.k compared to other women
Nothing special
There is a sob story with each FMC and the MC gets 'over' emotional
Basically it's not relatable
All the villains and mobs are horni and wants to Fyc.k the FMC
Overall. .. This can't be considered as a novel but a segs story
Don't get me wrong, I'm not against it but I love it
@Author you need to give the characters more depth and the females need to have more personality
This would improve the quality of this work by a lot
Not immersive, girls have the same personality when talking. To much bluntness when talking abou segs, expecially to someone mc just met. Not much of a challenge when getting girls as they all want a piece of mc even when they first saw him. Even a its a 999... yrs old Vgin will gladly open her cat for mc when they first met. lol
Overall; not immersive, poor writing, cringe dialogue, a ‘somewhat’ stupid/ignorant mc, no thrill/wish fulfillment and a good story, just need a reread and editing.
... well.. grammar is good. But i hated that mc basically went from sick and malnutrited level 1 kid the size of a chair with nothing that has the strenght of a sick dog... then he opens the starter pack and gets....to being level 100, 6''3 tall with 8 pack muscles. 9 inch D. With a godly rank sword, a godly rank sword skill and enough money to shame anyone, 2 godly physiques that can charm any woman alive with no effort thst has dual cultivstion and merge any new future phsyque he gets at chapter 3.... honest. He got soooo many overpowered things that is extremely excessive and ruins any progression that the story may have. Any random of these cheats is already enough but so many at once? It would have been 10 times.better of he got these slowly in a period of like 30 chapters or more
Great book , hope author continues with it , the novel is very interesting and has a good introduction for characters. As I am a new author , I can learn from others and their different writing styles which is very good by the way
MC is a narcissistic hypocrite. Every women is unsatisfied with their lovers and is willing to spread their legs immediately. Everything MC says is either stupid, lustful, hypocritical, or ignorant. MC is ridiculously OP for no reason. I could go on, but I'll stop here. The MC is super annoying. There is no meaningful conflict. Everything that happens just so people could suck to MC who didn't do anything. The only thing half descent here is the mindless f******.
