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Very quick paced, draws you in with action. Sometimes the sentences are a little long, so make sure to take your time reading them. The characters are realistic and intriguing. Can't wait to read more!
bruh for sure webnovel will choose this novel to satisfy pervs even if the story is trash......... why? WHY?!?!???????????????????????
Simp MC with a savior complex. Female lead is a higher status and I’m willing to bet probably a higher talent than him. Brilliantly written, I just personally don’t think I can read the typically good-two-shoes simp chasing after Mary Sue nonsense.
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please release more chapters for this book. I love the premise, and I love the world, I just wish the author would get a better translator or maybe just proof read his stuff a little more. otherwise, great story.
At least a worthy novel....1. Mc definitely have brain, i wont say he is smartest but he definitely has good amount intellect2. At last not system novel, system is good but only it has good structure and very just rule if not it just simply nonsense pasted on story or become bugged story3.Though it doesn't have system it mc cheat have basic element rpg so it easy to understand
The story awesome! The world building awesome! The characters awesome!What more can I say?Yeah! The trillion plus year old mc acts mature but is a mummy's boy.Normally, I'm tired of cultuvation novels but the cultivation here is more of the western type with mages, warriors, etc. The use of fate in the novel is mind blowing asf.This book has not yet gotten the attention it really deserves. The intricate mind of the mc gives me the chills, I love how he's not instantly a political ecoert despite all 33 lives. The characters are well written, I believe I said that before.And most of all!! The MC is handsome!! He holds the hearts of both males and female and the best he has silver hair or is it white?
while not breaking away from any of the tropes, it is light hearted enjoying read, and it isn't wish fulfillment as I can see. none of the characters including the main one have stood out in any way, but there is promise for the main character to let down his walls as he gets stronger and turn into a very dynamic character. He's calculating, but also seems to rush into things, but I'd like to see him interacting longer than 1 or 2 conversations, a talking pet, npc companion or another player would be a great course of action.
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I have never before read a story that made rich and ex-rich people seem so real and so thoroughly human. The level of realism in the story is exquisite and I love how the author treats the characters while revealing their important personality traits through action and not merely through telling. I think here is an exquisitely well crafted ratio of show and tell, and this got me wondering if there is more to this genre than I realized. All in all, an enjoyable read, 5/5, plenty of fun plot twists and everything else that readers will surely enjoy. I wish the author good luck.
Mc is a simp