I couldn’t make it passed chapter 12. The only reason I tried reading this was because MC is meant to be omniscient, which is a fat lie, at least by the end of chap 12 he still wasn’t. But that wouldn’t be a problem if MC at least had a sliver of intelligence but instead he is the most brain dead r*tard I’ve ever read about.
Honestly, pretty good. . Also, the amount of Honkai references is crazy. . In conclusion, Nice work, fellow Vietnamese. ???
For those of you wondering - this is extremely similar to Terrarium Adventure and Pet King. This is why it deserves a chance at least. This was not meant to be an action/killing novel though it does involve it. This was meant to be about FRUIT, FRUIT, AND FRUIT. A fluffy growing novel.
It's a little concerning since MC hasn't made a professional business transaction, he doesn't even know the market prices or how to gain more $ from this. This might change when his parents take over things.
But CNs always change for the good or bad. I'm sure MC will be a little ruthless later on. If I'm wrong it'll be the first time I ever see a beta MC in a CN. (I've seen worst betas so I'm not complaining) The Portal of 2 Worlds was terrible..
Its honestly one of if not the best r-18 novels I've read, period. The authors done a great job hitting all the turn ons without introducing any massive turn offs, aside from his lack of updates. It's been 26 days man
This Novel must get pick because it's Translation and Editor care about this Novel. Mc is not fool . he use his brain properly. he doesn't go after girls.
Mc character quite good. World background is slow but interesting.
this is gems
so like it or Levi dies.
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Why is this NyoiBo so greedy? taking on many projects but not being responsible for completing projects? give to other translators. There are still lots of good quality translators out there !! Kick out one person who is bad than the WN reputation gets worse, worse than small translation sites.
Good grammar which I really enjoy. I like the personality of all the characters and the different outlook on cultivation because I read lots of different cultivation kind of books and they’re usually very similar which makes it less enjoyable.
This is a very good novel. The MC is powerful and his twin daughters are very adorable and cute.The MC is very good to his daughters and doesn’t care about rest of the world.
So I will gonna rate this 5 star, I already read the previous novel and I like how this rewrite so far giving his mother a store maybe this will give different vibes from the siblings hahaha
This is the third novel I've read about the check-in system.
And they all have the same events and the same characters, and that's so boring.
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