Rohan_Gianni
The first 150 chapters were fresh and interesting. But after that it gets repetitive. Win a challenge to get the new girl. Its already 9 new girls + shemale or more in less than 150 chapters. The girls acting cute and shy are the main story. Theres no story about the mc. Its a harem route rpg through and true. The mc is like the background trash behind for you to admire the girls only. So this is not a novel nor a hentai since the most is indirect kiss by food. It is more like a game guide to push the girls buttons unrealistically. Theres better romance and harem novels out there.
nice story line is something bgood jhgffdv
looks like it's written by an uneducated bigot
Don't you think it's a bit unfair to the readers if you reduce the translation rate....... There are many people including me eagerly waiting for updates and you guys throw a bomb at us...... instead of adding new novels day after day..... why don't you focus on your current ones
Overall good book but I am a little dissatisfied with how slow the cultivation for the MC is. 220 chapters in and he's only at the mid stage of the second lowest realm
Really drew me in, shame that the translation went downhill after the first 40 chapters. I genuinely enjoyed the beginning, but once the slightly edited mtl hit and you constantly had to make an educated guess as to who is currently speaking because the correct and consistent use of pronouns is just too much to expect from a translation you're expected to pay for... It made the reading experience a lot less enjoyable.
In short:
story = good
translation = not worth your money
Does this book have a sequel or something? I can’t find it
I look forward to this book I will definitely read it. hopefully it will get selected or released soon so I can read it. Don't stop trying to write this one it seem very good.
mate everything was fine and dandy. the story was good the character was good the background is kinda mysterious. the update stability so far is nice but there are some problems that author really needs to think about. first of all what is this book about. it's game so you need to make it clear the data about the enemyy when they fight the reward that he gets,the quest that he takes, etc but instead this novel is like an urban slice of life romance type paced story or even an Japanese high school type story which is inconsistent from my point which makes it barely readable like a game novel should be and another point is the exaggeration of expression. for eg. if I say he smiled,".........." which makes sense but when you put he widely smiled,".........." then that makes it extremely exaggerated for me. if it's once or twice it's fine but if it's after every single time that he smiles you put widely after it then it makes it unpalatable for me. overall everything is extremely good but author should definitely focus on what he is writing about if he wants to make the novel a top class which the reader want to read again and again.
thank you
your sincere reader
Mc is ok but the story is trash first he hunts most of the time where there is lvl 40-50 humanoid monsters he is using trash sword and equipment how!!! i dont know... would allllll those monsters he killed not drop good equipment??? he is in a high lvl area??? second we have no idea what are the equipment stats.... third way is everyone stupid in this world there is like 2 people who have normal intelligence almost all of them are like young masters from those cultivation novel wtf???? This is suppose to be a high tech advance civilization that have developed VR way the **** is everyones IQ 10???? I really hate this kind of Chinese novel they dont make fucking sense everyone of them have that 4th grade syndrome or whatever it is called.. it would be much better if the author did a novel about this guy but he got transported in another world where he got a kids body and has talent to become a mage but he is really weak this way we could see how mc grows into a real combat mage not this stupid ****
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It is a good book but what I found most annoying was the money system so if anyone else needs it it is:
1W :10,000
10W : 100,000
100W : 1,000,000
1000W : 10,000,000
