Heavens Devouring Emperor

The author has a creative mind. Editing and proofreading would clear away distractions for readers.

Important notice!!!

I'm Asian who is trying to write in English. There will be mistakes and errors. So bear with me. If you see mistakes, let me know please.

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The story seems fine. However, despite my vast experience reading poorly translated/trash novels, I could barely make sense of what was going on.

It is an awesome novel I couldn't find anything wrong with the novel Character development ,world background etc is perfect I hope author will continue with the great work

Over all 4.5 /5
The story line is well written and it develops accordingly. Although it's a little bit early.
The grammarbis fair enough.
The character's are fine.
The world background is well designed.
And the update rate is excellent so far.

ok let me start by saying I like the idea and the fact there is not too much cliche that's a plus for me but the negative of this book is the fact that I can barely understand what is going on I seriously recommend getting an editor I tried reading it but it was tough like reading a mtl. so my review or constructive criticism is get an editor you need one bad but other than that I enjoyed the book