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Hopefully, this novel is a better version of "Legend of the Mythological Genes", because it had a great premise, but became rushed and lost all of its focus towards what made it good. It also became super racist and nationalistic. This novel seems to have a similar premise minus the mythological part. I'll give it a read when it comes out.
just started reading, and Got To100 Chapters. pretty Well writen.. Excited to Read more. Did notice Author said 3 daily cups but is only updating weekly, hoping that he picks up the pace again I normally don't start on anything not over 500chps.
Author, my only question is will u be writing faster soon?
definitely worth your time
If there is one thing that I can say it is that Anji knows her characters.
they read well and despite fitting into the typical character types, they have personalities that many writers try to give their characters and fail to do so.
it started off with a bit of an info dump, but since then it has been smooth sailing.
overall the world is pretty simple and easy to understand,
great work author keep it up
I read up to chapter 40 and what I can say is that there are very absurd elements in this novel. The event that leaves Mc paraplegic can easily be described as an assassination attempt and the consequences for the villain who did it are not discussed later. The Mc doesn't know about the game's existence when he gets his virtual helmet, and the sister who has taken care of him for 4 years (who is also a player) is another item without explanation. The possibility of bringing something from the game to the real world (and the Mc not knowing the game) leaves me perplexed. The Mc is unable to join the game for 2 days to escape problems and his not doing ANY research on the rules of the game during this period is proof of his foolishness. I'm honestly going to drop this novel because this level of nonsense is too big for me.
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Author here. This is a book I've written years ago so it might be underwhelming and not up to expectations. However, I hope that someone will enjoy this story. For more recent stories, check out "Your Plot is Mine" or "The Hero will Die". Thank you for reading.
Why are Chinese peasants so stupid and greedy? I thought maybe it was just bad writing for a novel but every novel is like this. It must be based on reality.
Its a low-key MC in style from the sign in novels and since i enjoy these normally i read the mtl up to ch. 60 and then i dropped it.
Its not that it is Bad, its just very very slow and too detailed.
What i mean with it is that half of the novel is item-descritions from stuff he gets and honestly its get boring to read the 50 description of a item that he will probably never use.
Add that to the fact that there are few timeskips and you often feel bored and that nothing had happend.
On the Plus side when stuff happens its Actually fine/good just not enough to motivate me, but maybe with Translation its better so when you like sign-in in more Detail then its for you.
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This novel is too overrated.
The translation sucks. I could feel my brain cells dieing just trying to read this.
Anyone who is going to read this,
read with caution.