good story that follows the life of a unfortunate soul (died from electrocution after getting out of the shower let's be real not the best way to die)
the main character starts of a bit 2d
knows almost nothing of the world not even including the previous body owners memories
weak to the point of dying from a cold (this is how the original body owner got replaced)
and last but not least can see his "stats" in the corner of his eyes
sounds like the average hey i died but now i am in a different world so far.
but from this point it gets beter after he finds out about the potential he gets from tragedie artifacts "he thinks it's from rare gems at first" to upgrade his stats
0.3% in a state of his choosing for every 100% potential
or a 1 rank skill upgrade of his valid skill list for every 100% potential
sounds like not a bad deal but it gets increasingly harder to reach 100%
not a to OP system but still gives him an early advantage
it can do a bit more than this but let's not go in the details
as for the story so far "chap 135" it has a lot of good action not the standard gets massive upgrade thanks to some random break tru halfway the fight "im looking at u coiling dragon"
most important it seems like it has a far ahead planed story line not some random fight get stronger the fight some more
so far there are 4 to 6 different small stories linked to the main char
1 the obvious martial art story
helping his dojo to not collapse
characters involved are mostly his master , senior brother , senior sister and the newly formed martial alliance
2 the golden hoop / detective story
this 1 seems to run to an end but probably gonna be linked to the others at the point of meeting the mysterious master of wite eagle
3 the "magical" part of the story
avenge the dead of the old antique store owner digging deeper in the mysteries of the world
4 family part of the story
his uncle's inheritance of some sort of for most part underworld power house group
5 the "romance" part of the story
potential love interests so far ar,
his step sister , brorther con and over protective
Felicity the wealthy girl he met on the day at the lake ,later she gives him a recommendation so he can enter a i think "private" library
finds some old banned book that describes "treasure" location and this story part is on hold to be explored with her next school break
and the latest 1
eliza: sister of golden hoop NR 6 aka Su Lin not sure if this is gone be a 1 sided crush of some real development is gonna happen too early to tell
there ar more very brief hints at female's liking the mc but nothing substantial
6 the latest part of the story i read seems to be breaking the barrier of grand master and reaching a more advanced version of power this seems to be mostly linked to the golden hoop NR 6 aka Su Lin and his military background family
but for the most part i am really interested in this part of the Synopsis
"However, his journey doesn’t end with Garen. Instead this is but the first of many bodies that Luo Jing will come to wield in his mystical journey between worlds."
i am realy wondering how this is gonna be pulled of
maybe another tragic dead or perhaps some form of ascension
is he gone keep his skils
a new world or the same 1 but a different continent don't forget the world is not even fully mapped yet
or gets a new game+ kind of vibe maybe like a free potential point reset
i dont know but i am certainly waiting in anticipation on how this story develops
the 1 thing i hope for not to happen is a reset every 300+ chapters making every single last character we have come to like and love obsolete
so far it's a great novel but hey don't take my word for it
it's better to read all of it on our own
Writing Quallity: good
Updating Stability: don’t care
Story Development: Slow, boring, repetitive
Character Development: Horrible. Main character constantly goes against the “cold blooded and ruthless super soldier” personality given to him.
World Background: Nothing special.
Overall: A book with good grammar but a horrible idea, horrible development, a horribly written main character, and a generic world background.
Very fun story. The system itself leads to numerous opportunities for plot and the method of implements of the system makes it not so op as you might think.
So far so good for a series hopefully it does not go down hill but go up hill meaning it gets better and better as the story keeps going on the longer it goes on.
Keep it up,keep it up your story is very good and it a great storyline I hope you dont drop it. Guided by the way of MCs to supremacy . Love it, love it, love it, dont drop, don't drop, dont drop dont drop dont drop
I like the story so far, the characters are amazing, the plot looks good. its a good book
Although sometimes you feel off by some sentences there is only 1 or 2 per 2-3 chapters so writing quality is one of the highest i ever seen.Story development feels pretty good too without all those constant faceslap ,backstab.Romantic subplot is instead of heavendefying worldshattering G cup thing waisted beaty falling in to mc's hands its just a pretty girl with a tragic backstory, harbouring geniune feelings towards each other.
Спасибо за хорошую работу мне понравилось спасибо вам большое что написали что будет в будущем
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Interesting writing style.i like the author’s approach to this story and how she eventually connects it to the religious side. Its not easy to write and engage the readers with this kind of story. This book is so intense with raw emotions...you need to sit down and take a moment to digest them. Its not easy. Kudos to the author for achieving this feat. I highly recommend this book.
If you enjoyed HNOF, the, you will love this. Our MC transmigrated into a villainous old man's body, and everyone including his disciples are trying to kill him. It is well developed and fast paced. A recommended must read.
How is this thing chosen? Seriously. Such bull!
The story is very modern and heart touching. The author has touched every human aspect and gives a vivid description of the characters and their lives. I request the author to fasten his writing speed as his every chapter leaves a mystery behind it.
This book brings out the raw emotions of a man struggling to overcome his past, I loved it right from the get-go and couldn't stop reading. The author did an amazing job with the story, well done