Eh, doesn't stand out to me personally.
P.S Can a fellow Daoist enlighten this junior brother on how to post a review under 140 characters, as I see my fellow brothers are quiet skilled in this aspect.
Just finished catching up on reading Reverend Insanity a few days ago, this was a good pick me up. for me this is a 10/10 read so far. The author usually uploads something everyday, which is surprising given the quality of the writing. if anything this is good because it stays close to the pacing and general feeling of the source text. the power scaling seems decent so far and the OG characters seem to act like they would have in the original story, especially Fang Yuan. The author did a really good job recreating the writing style of RI, or at least I get that feeling I get when reading RI. 10/10 keep up the good work!
Chinese name: 我能提取熟练度 ("I can extract mastery/proficiency" or smth like this)
Status: Ongoing, 1021 chapters
It's not a best novel here, but it suits my taste, so I'll try read it further and write a comment here.
For now, I recommend this to everyone
This story would be good if it was properly edited. I understand why other reviews call it a MTL, i.g. it is barely readable. I understand how it may be unique, but consider My German Empire and Out of Space. These novels do this concept way better.
Reviewed at chp93:
WQ(3/5) - There are some mistakes(typos, extra words, wrong sentence structures) but it's few and far in between. Nothing amazing but it's readable enough.
SD(2/5) - I'm not a huge fan of the pacing of the story. It feels very "jerky". Like a car shifting gears too quick. The plot progression so far has been lacklustre in my opinion. The premise is interesting enough but can't raise the score above a solid 3. Now for the "plot" for those who care, pretty alright. It's decent but not ground-breaking. So far we have a few chps of Selena and MC. It mostly depends on your preference, pretty rough but still quite vanilla.
CD(3/5) - I'm torn on this. The MC is interesting enough though frustrating at times. The issue is that the way the author introduces us to him as a character, there are far too many perspective shifts, it's told through flashbacks and having too many in any medium is never a good idea. It's fine to be used sparingly to show past events but thats the issue, here it's used as a tool to convey the MC's char to readers, even worse is it's in parts. It might contribute to that "jerky" feeling I get when reading. Now I commend the author for actually building side characters. For example, Selena and Verona are given a fair bit of screentime and inner monologues to give us an idea of their thoughts and character. This can be a double-edged sword however, as focus might be shifted off the MC. But I'm glad to say the author divided the focus quite well. Now why I'm torn on this is the fact I like the side char building but absolutely abhor the MC's char building itself. It feels inorganic and doesn't flow well compared to how the side chars are shown.
US(4/5) - The author seems pretty consistent in his updates and actually responds to his audience.
WB(4/5) - The world itself is slowly being built and honestly it would be a solid 3, I gave it a 4 just because it's piqued my interest and is genuinely interesting. The world the author is writing seems mysterious and intriguing, u can't help but think there are far deeper secrets due to the hints here and there.
In conclusion, a decent but rough read. The idea is solid but the execution isn't. The pacing and plot of the story needs quite a fair bit of work, especially with the MC's char building. It just feels completely inorganic to show the character like this. But here's the great kicker, premium chps are locked at chp30. That is going to greatly hurt the exposure this novel is going to get. For the word count of chps, it's just not worth it. I might return to this novel in the future but so far it doesn't look too promising. All the best author and I hope this review helps.
I enjoyed how brief this synopsis is. Its such a great plot, the writer has made an amazing story. I totally enjoyed the very first few chapters of it. Big up.
This is really good, I did liked it. Though, there is some errors in the book as in: capitalisation, the uses of "!" "." "?" and others not being used that much, spelling, spaces... But, I know that the author worked hard on the book. keep on the hard work...[img=recommend]
Its lol type novel and i have never play lol before so i don't understand what are they even saying so if you are lol fan go for this novel.
Very interesting! I was immediately hooked from the very first paragraph! Nice plot too! And the writing is so awesome! Overall it's freakin good!!
This novel is one of the best On site hands down so many Writers fail to establish a romance that doesn’t make the Mc a simp or alows a side character to outshine the Mc, while at the same time The side characters have their own destiny and are not riding the coat tail of the Mc to gain power ups, his Potential girlfriend does not use him like in many stories on this site
Really good. I just started it and it's really engaging and fleshed out well! I have two complaints, 1 the occasional grammar/spelling error which is totally fine and easy to ignore, and the fact that the ranking goes SS-S-A-M-D-F. Why is there an M??? LOL, but I really enjoy the story, would highly recommend.
Wow, bagus kak, sudah tegang dari awal, belum apa2 sudah di bawa ke medan perang taunya cuma flashback