I give it 6* my brothers and sisters it's one of the greatest 'ideas' that readed so far it can be better story but it still one of greatest and there is many rooms to make it better but still its great
World background has been described very well along with the character design. The writing quality so far has proven to be of high standard as there is no grammar errors I picked up on. Few questions though - Will this be fast paced quick growth mc (what I prefer)? What is the update schedule like currently because it doesn’t show any number? As long as you don’t have any other things going on I would love to see a daily or more upload schedule. Overall though great story I’m looking forward to where this is going and keep up the great work!
Hey everybody, this is a shameless review from yours truly, the author.
All I have to say here is, make it to The Ceremony, and then decide whether you want to drop it or not.
Thank you for checking out my first novel!
Other than a few spelling and grammar errors (namely capitalization and sentence flow), this book seems great for my collection! Awesome premise, but im afraid the writing quality is only about ~3.5 stars. So overall 4.6, pretty good!
Dont feel discouraged, your writing skills are bound to get better with time!
Cool nice, nice this type of novels I the thing I've been searching for, thanks author san for you second? or third? novel that somewhat perfectly match my preferable preference for a novel I wanted to read.
Welp, the first chapter was intense enough as it is. He had done so much for the world yet as he is supposed to have met his end, a new and much dangerous world awaited him.
Anyhows, I could somehow connect Stain and the Octopus teacher from Assasination classroom to the MC.
Octopus teacher because of his Top Assassin origin story while Stain due to hid extreme ways of purging the stains of the world.
i just started reading it and the grammar is awful. hard to read, i gave it 1 star cuz it doesnt deserves such a high rating it has now. so have fun with 1 if u edit the novel maybe ill changed it if its even possible!!!
Mc is an orphan, yes, but actually has a pretty okay life. Then he awakens a power, but he doesn't know what. And everyone including him has his superpower wrong. Funny, but vexing at times. If you are looking for a good laugh, then this is the novel for you.
DO NOT READ. Initially amazing story that eventually derails into literally nothing after 500 chapters due to the author essentially giving up on the story. Imagine if Oda decided to end One Piece in 10 chapters during the Marine Ford arc, or if Naruto randomly ended after he got the rasenshurican. That's this story - an amazing and elaborate world and set up that randomly gets force ended at the end of an abrupt 20 chapter arc during what feels like halfway through the story. Everything is squandered and it happens in such a sexist, pointless, and Chinese nationalist way. You will literally only regret reading this in the long-term. The world you learn to love will get ripped apart and tarnished.
the story the characters the background ,i like everything but for some reason the author stoped writing a long time ago ,please stop torturing me ,i don't care if it's slow update i just need to read the next update
Oh my god 98 chapters a week and rank 3 as of this moment I am a literal god lol the chapters I'm pushing out per day are just insane whoscompetin