Alosim
What can you expect from a good author?
Great Story, a great experience knowing what his readers want, and most importantly, how to excite their readers to be mesmerized by their story.
And all of this is just the beginning as the author creates a Universe where all of his books are interlinked, making it to wait in excitement for his upcoming works!!!!
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I read up to chapter 15, it’s an ok story, the author has said it himself, he is new to writing, it is very apparent, the bad guys seem to only know how to be lecherous, and that’s all it’s about. The MC trains to get stronger to beat up rapist scum, after the fourth time it gets old. There is some foreshadowing about the expansion of the world with new interesting things soon to come… If I’m ever bored enough I’ll pick it up again.
i wish read it earlier when this author is still active to support this amazing warhammer ff. his idea mostly of close to my fantasy so i may be bias.
It was one of the best novel I've ever read. The character building is excellent. Every support characters has his/her own personality. It is also funny sometimes but not cheap. I highly recommend it.
*sigh*
why must the author spoil such a good story concept with racism?
why must the story be so cringe?
why is the mc IQ so low?
why?why?why?why?why?why?why?
*sigh*
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that novel went from barely readable to downright fuскing embarassing as soon as the author introduced a woman. it's really hard not to cringe
interesting story, so far the development of story is good hope the next chap will not drop..
keep going
I have read 15 chapters so far and it looks good and unique. There some minor spelling mistake but overal looks promising.
I really liked the first version, hence my high rating for so few chapters (4). hope this repost gets past the original(67), which is a rare achievement for reposts. good luck, author.
this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up
this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up
this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up
this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up
this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up
this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up
this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up