where is update i am hooked its a great read unfortunately its short on chapters at moment but let it not hinder or stop u from reading it because if you are veteran sci-fi reader you would wanna test this one out because it has lot Science Fiction with magic elements to which make story unique in its own right
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Keikokumars, I have read all your stories since they were first posted on Royalroadl years ago and remember waiting day by day for updates on this story till it was eventually finished. At the time, this story was one of my favorites, if not my number one favorite, as I loved the epic tale of regret, love and more importantly one man's undying quest to conquer the demons of his past which have haunted his every waking minute. While I will be the first to admit that overall your proise and dictation can come off a little bland and at times disharmonious with the improper use of either conjugation of word choice, I deeply enjoyed the tale that you weaved. When you decided to take down both this story and Novis Gaius from Royalroadl only to post it on Amazon, while I was disappointed at the time I also understood that this was probably your way of trying to follow your dreams while making money off of it. However seeing you post this story here with little in the way of changes in either the grammer/ syntax of your sentences or in the overall plot, I must confess that I am disappointed that such a high potential story has fallen short of my hopes. I came back to read this story after years since I wanted to reminisce on one of my favorite stories on Royalroadl only to find that it was no longer even available through payment on Amazon and is still only a little more than half way done on this site. I hope that you still finish fully posting this story so that others may read and enjoy the full tale, but only wish that if you are slowly reposting this story that you take the time to edit and improve on this story as the rest has already been written before.
Giving 5 stars just cuz of the #villain tag. I've stopped reading after a few chapters as I hate waiting for updates. So will wait till more chapters are there before reading. Hopefully Mc is actually evil and not some trash antihero
There are two things that will make a person such as this Kaiser to instantly like a story. 1: Fancy cover, 2: comedy genre.Why wait for the japanese to release new romcoms when you have 100+ comedy CN waiting for you. Yes you. Just click the like button!
Like author mentioned before, inspired from MVS, you will see those touches everywhere. If you've read the great demon system or whatever it's called, it's like a blend between that and MVS. Very similar to those two, combined.The story is interesting, the grammar isn't perfect but you won't find yourself questioning yourself too much. I do hope the MC can become ...less pure, I guess, I know it's supposed to be the angelic system but there can be bad angels too anyways, don't always trust reviews, read it for yourself
RAW PLEASE! I want it! I want it RAW!common is there any daoist willing to give me the raw?! Please am but a poor daoist seeking for the RAW
I feel bad about this novel, because the characters are quite unique and their interactions mostly very well done.My problem with this novel is the total lack of systematic world building.On one hand there was enough time (6 months) for private/somewhat poor people to build their own Apocalypse shelters. On the other hand not even 1 month has passed and the MC thinks it is normal to kill each other for seeds, the government shelters have run out of basic/necessary tec products, medicine is supposedly already scarce and the police is missing basic survival equipment. Do not ask why the police station is still up and running, when the whole earth is supposed to cool down into an ice-age. Or why a unknown gets access to the police chief when there are at least suspicions about him and there are government workers getting killed. Also a solar storm big enough to change the color of the sun and atmosphere for prolonged amount of times would destroy every satellite in orbit and most electric equipment on the ground. Why the hell is the first part of this story centered around a satellite station? It makes no sense.The upgrade system is also quite weird and inconsistent. Point distribution and timing seems random.The thing about the MC is that he is supposedly a survival expert who is very active in the network, but he needs to buy food with points, has no seeds stored and there is not a single instance where he is actually doing something a survivalist would do, he just uses his points to solve everything.Calling this an survival in the Apocalypse novel would be wrong, because the survival aspect is either glossed over or solved with point magic. There is no struggle, not even a hint of tension. Mc is basically just playing around outside in the "wasteland" and not actually doing any "surviving".
For now this Looks really well but then again this a new type of take on the two world traveler genre. so Far iT is entertaining. Hopefully this gets picked.
Insanity, I don’t know how can you read this stupid novel. The story is non existant and the concept of time is fked up, the MC is lazy as fk, I mean 30 years to only increase in 4 minor lvls..? The language is hard to understand in some parts, and some content/explanation is missing thus creating lots of loop holes in the story.If you like this novel, I advice you to have a mental checkup ASAP.
Didn't expect this to be a hidden gem. It's a pretty good story with a unique system. But it's grammatical mistakes doesn't allow usual readers to enjoy it. Only one who have comprehended the "the dao of MTL" and reached a high realm in it like my humble self can enjoy reading this work...And ooh yes there are H-scenes.......You can Thank me later.
Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................?