A Girl From the Past

Coming off my last review, I have finally given up hope of the author in having any common sense at all.Positive thing is that the author has severely reduced his sl*tty portrayal of females in the story, apart from Sharlyn.Other than that, the author is blatantly not considering how the other players even get their Lvls so fast when they do not reach the capabilities of the members of Zero Wing.Take this for example.During the Crusade Quest, the core members of Zero Wing manage to occupy the Top 100 Ranking List of players.They were Lvl 22 and above, as stated by the author. The previous No.9 was Tyrant who was Lvl 21(was annoyed at how he even got Lvl 21 too).The author even stated that the 1 lvl diff in Lvl 21 and 22 were like heaven and earth. Any player would have to grind for long periods to get to Lvl 22.Yet only after a few days, there are players who already reached Lvl 24. Amazing farming rate, even better than Zero Wing or MC.Though you can say that most spent time trying to complete their Class Change Quest, it was at most 2 days. Yet those.Lvl 24 players, who in theory cannot even defeat Lvl 30 NPCs, which MC helped Zero Wing with their upgraded Equipment to defeat, somehow gained so much Exp in a short timeframe.All because the author wants to create an "underestimated protagonist" scene for the 5v5 Duel in the Arena. Better still, one of the players already has full FineGold Equipment and a DarkGold Weapon. MC doesnt even have full FineGold Equipment.At this point, to not have MC be too far ahead of the other players, he has to resort to plucking numbers out of the sky and use them as the player Lvls. All without consideration of how these players would even obtain such high Exp.Seriously, if you are looking for consistency in this story, especially if player Lvls are a must for you, be prepared for a lot of blood puking, because it is a sh*t show out there.I have no idea how many times I have raged over this matter. You can say that maybe Im too into the details of the story and need to chill out and enjoy it from a different perspective, but details are what make the story. Consistent details are the ones that make a good author distinguish from a bad one.I can already forgive the author for blatant plagiarism from different Animes such as SAO and Log Horizon. Even OnePunchMan (wait till the Big Dipper Training Centre part).Just be aware if you want to read this story.

The book is amazing as it builds upon the story that was presented in DD1 and DD2. The characters themselves have flaws and it can be said that the characters types may be repetitive especially in the way that girls throw themselves at the MC. But what’s amazing is that there’s small changes in the cultivation method in each of the stories.

JUST started reading! Can't wait to see how the plot unravels! DD3 left on a sad ending with soo  many question!! What's going to happen to God realm? Will Tang Wulin meet Tang San and xiao wu? What about Nana and the war between dragons and God? Now with their child looking like he will be able to answer these questions! I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Honestly the world is a bit limited to the region so we have to expand, a harem romance that does not have +18 ... Really sad it will take him to fix if not hehehe (I'll call a schoolmate to pull yours when you slept), The elemenstos: He has affinity with everything, but almost never used imagination ... Come on, right? The guy is from Earth, how can he not make a giant fire bird? A simple golem? A hurricane? A giant dragon or a water snake? In short, it has several types and does not use, but as it is in the beginning we consider, The main divinity is undoubtedly very stolen ... Even worse the Face Enem

Keikokumars, I have read all your stories since they were first posted on Royalroadl years ago and remember waiting day by day for updates on this story till it was eventually finished.  At the time, this story was one of my favorites, if not my number one favorite, as I loved the epic tale of regret, love and more importantly one man's undying quest to conquer the demons of his past which have haunted his every waking minute.  While I will be the first to admit that overall your proise and dictation can come off a little bland and at times disharmonious with the improper use of either conjugation of word choice, I deeply enjoyed the tale that you weaved. When you decided to take down both this story and Novis Gaius from Royalroadl only to post it on Amazon, while I was disappointed at the time I also understood that this was probably your way of trying to follow your dreams while making money off of it.  However seeing you post this story here with little in the way of changes in either the grammer/ syntax of your sentences or in the overall plot, I must confess that I am disappointed that such a high potential story has fallen short of my hopes.  I came back to read this story after years since I wanted to reminisce on one of my favorite stories on Royalroadl only to find that it was no longer even available through payment on Amazon and is still only a little more than half way done on this site.  I hope that you still finish fully posting this story so that others may read and enjoy the full tale, but only wish that if you are slowly reposting this story that you take the time to edit and improve on this story as the rest has already been written before.

Amazing start to the story! It left me wanting more after each chapter. The characters and world around them are so interesting. This is the type of book I'd go out of my way to buy and read over and over again. I'm excited to see more come from this. Keep up the great work!