One of the best books I’ve ever read and I’m not 300 chapters in. I can’t describe how phenomenal this novel is. It’s not for everyone, as the author states, it’s a book more akin to water dripping through stone. However every drop is so thoroughly fleshed, it’s extraordinary. There’s no gimmicks, there’s no specialty, only Tao. This author truly has stuck by his goal in writing this fairy tail. He wanted to create a book about a young ink painting (Mo Hua) building the foundation he needs to cultivate to immortality through arrays. If you are a fan of arrays, if you are a fan of constant accumulation, and the gratification related to success from accumulation, this is the book for you. This book is slow, with long chapters, heavy emotions, the love of family, the strength of friendship, the strength of the common good, the strength of industry, and most importantly, the strength of the formation.
A very good novel. Without harem. Hope it still stays at top in power ranking.
I personally am loving it and quite possibly in the near future this work will become 4/5 in writing and 5 in the rest it uses several resources of narrative connection and character development that are only noticeable in best sellers. But although the writing in particular is still somewhat immature, it has everything to improve and be a great work.
This is a pretty good book I would recommend reading
The revoked a star from the writing quality is simply on grammar, and a few spelling mistakes. Some of your sentences are a little choppy, but other than that well done. I'm not sure on your stability in updates, so I just gave it a 5 as to not retract from your overall score. The story development is quite good! I really enjoy how the powers are presented and explained, and how in depth it goes. The character is well rounded, though in my opinion he is a little stupid :> Still, I gave you five stars because personal opinion shouldn't result in a retraction of a star. Through the chapters I read, it is very difficult to get a clear view of what is around the MC. I think describing the area more would help with that! It's not too bad though, so I only retracted one star. Well done :>
after she tells the little secrets and powers to an organization, she becomes a lab rat and then they say that her DNA (blood) is purer and wants to make an exchange proposal for her blood to do the rituals for her organization agents of it only for the good of humanity, and she accepts for them to give it in exchange for the materials to make her stronger.My note: for me she became a blood donor (but actually she became a laboratory rat) for the organization
Thanks for the chapterThis novel suits me well. I am loving this novel.I hope that you will keep your good work going.I will vote for this every day
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This book is definitely one of the best I’ve read. It tops most stories with the way it pulls the reader into a trance almost as if being hypnotized.I think the sentences are well formed. All words are written correctly and all sentences have proper punctuation.Character Design: Definitely top notch. You get double the characters with every proceeding chapter.World Background: World is solid. Clearly explained. Meaning is found in every sentence if you ask me. Story Development: Something of its own. Unlike anything I have read. You know what they say “the longer”Cant say about the update stability 1 for nowEXTRA SPOILER-only the smartest will understand the underlying meaning of this story
This author could write their to-do list and still manage to make it interesting to read. Everything, from characterisation to adjectives implored in this work of art, is magnificent. I cannot praise the writer enough. Marco’s story is heart-wrenching, whole-hearted and full of tears. The characters he meets along his journey to (fingers-crossed) find peace will send you on your own trip to agony land. It is so worth it. Give this book a read and a half - I guarantee you won’t be disappointed.
The only thing that's worse than joining Arsenal is Newcastle. but not by much, having said that good story, even if the kids a Gunner, better that thqn a Magpie
I know that you're a beginner so good luck!!!I have high hope for this novel ???The side chapters you're planning is a good idea DO itTip:Use Grammarly when writing chapters or get a friend to edit your novel or do it yourselfPower!!!Power!!!