Read 40 chapters and i have to say I'm pleasantly surprised, it has all the points needed for a good cultivation novel.
Decent characters, determined protag, a very unique world background , no unnecessary cliches that prolong arcs , a fluent writing style. I hope this gets picked so i can re read after i finish up with the mtl
Has potential, many grammatical mistakes and the names aren't capitalized
It's readable tho and the the issue with capitalization has been fixed in the latest chapter.
Hello, This is the author of World of Chakra,
This novel is my original work and I'm writing it as I found my plot good enough to impress you all. I will do my utmost to keep up a regular updating schedule and upload chapters with decent word counts without affecting its quality
I sincerely hope this story will give everyone a wonderful journey.
Three phrases: I lost the sense of Time, my mind was fresh and relaxing when I read, The world is immersive and the system of cultivation is wonderful.
I don't know where to even begin.
This novel does make me feel anxious for it's characters, not many novel could do that. It doesn't shy away from something "dark" like most, but instead hit you with some heavy stuff every once in a while.
That "Deranged" in the novel's title sums it up best.
The character felt "alive" to me, They aren't just cardboard cut-outs. Deep rooted trauma, guilt, identity issues... The flaws make them more human to me.
I give this novel:
Panther&Human hybrid/10.
reading novel with incubus thing is not really my type but when i read this novel this really hype me up, over all this story was so entertaining and amazing!!!!, i'll add this to my library!! i'm rooting for you dear author!
It's awesome and amazingly accurate but the mc should have learnt ahead
If I must say, this story is great! I love it already.Please update more ??❤
A nice story plot author, really commendable.
A solid world background with a very interesting and we'll written story. It's very easy to understand and follow up with what was being told in every chapter, even though I'm not that familiar with some terms and places. Overall, I hope this book get more attention from the readers. Keep working on it, Author.
5 stars! This book has the potential, I love your writing quality so much, this being your first novel is already amazing! Please continue to write more, the story overall is intriguing, good job! keep up the good work, Author!
Bit early, but as I loved the previous book, I'm sure I'll love this one as well. Expecting great things, brother. You have complete monopoly over all my power stones.