overall good novel, characters still need more depth, and fast updates (and harem XD)
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This novel is my original work and I'm writing it as I found my plot good enough to impress you all. I will do my utmost to keep up a regular updating schedule and upload chapters with decent word counts without affecting its quality
I sincerely hope this story will give everyone a wonderful journey.
I couldn't understand it at all. Sucky descriptions of characters, bad grammar, bad character development, and wtf do you mean get can talk while being only three years old and everyone acting like he could talk before that.
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
