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Literally amazing. Actually realistic and intelligent- The main character uses his system to gauge the world, understand difficulty and make deductions. I find the concept very interesting and it should be at least top 30 on the site given, how bad are the plots some of the novels there have.
If this doesn't get picked, I'll revolt.
A classic but interesting novel. I haven't read much so I can't tell for sure but, there are two problems I'd like to criticize. First, it is a really serious problem. Author has a problem conveying information. There is almost no basic information and MC is knowing people or things he's never been in contact with. For example, we know amlost nothing about the game at all. We only get to know that mc's profession is a tanky melee type. We don't know any other information about the professions at all. And maybe because he think it may become annoying, author didn't show mc's status at the beginning. We don't know what status the game use, original status, or how much increase per lvl. Nothing. Nad when authir feels like it, he suddenly show the status and says mc's status is really incredible. We don't know how to compare at all. Although mc's status is not shown, almost every piece of equipment has their status explained. And mc started saying things like "Wow. This lvl5 blue equipment has tge status of a lvl10 equipment which noone has ever seen before." and "Wow, these monsters, even pro gamers may not be able to fight as well as me" when he's clearly not in the industry. In short, author hides all info and only says "Hey, my mc is really awesome." The second thing should be the balance. While I know that this novel is all about mc's picking up op equipment, he got a third lvl out of the five lvls of equipment currently known at lvl5 and that's not even a one time thing. He's destroying the game balance from the very start. Unless it is a solo mcvs guilds, there can be almost suspense at all with this kind if balance.
Dispite the criticism, this is still a pretty interesting book. So, I still recommend trying out.
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This story is rather interesting. I don't remember reading this kind of story where another character transmigrates instead of the MC but the cover is misleading.
If you don't read the story, you won't really know the entire idea of the novel just by looking at the synopsis either. The translation is ok, not the best but neither the worst, and the cover...I'm pretty "inpressed."
Love the webnovel, Amazing work, currently there's about 500 Ch for this novel which is not on here, but 5 stars from me for this novel, and this is some filler text just to meet review standards cause I don't want to give any spoilers, just go ahead and read it!!
*.*this novel is written by the author of night ranger**
nuff said
the basic idea is really fun- What if a school is being proactive to send their student in another world?. Thats the gist of it after i read the first chapter. reading this bovel reminding me of the most used writing style in japanese web-novel: a first perspective from a mumbling protagonist. it's really bland, but you can enjoy the novel if the plot is interesting enough. After all, even the web-novel version of tate no yuusha managed to succeed as the one of the most popular web-novel, even if the description in it is feels rather bland. The question is: is the plot in this novel interesting enough to make the readers ignore its bland description?
First the main two things people dislike which is the writing quality and point of view shifts. The writing quality isn’t perfect but readable as it is mostly minor mistakes like lighting/ lightning getting switched up as an example. I usually auto correct it as I read so I don’t notice it much but just something to be aware of for those who care about that. The Pov switch in the beginning isn’t the best but it improves as it goes. The different point of views let us see what movements are happening in the world that relate to the mc or provide information whether it is about the world or characters. The way it is used especially later on with characters to flesh them out is great.
The world is done well with a interesting background and how it works. The story is good keeping you interested on finding out more and seeing what actions the main character will take. To wrap it up it is a good read that is worth a try to see if you like it and I hope it gets updated plenty in the future as it is getting good.
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