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Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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the story is great and very entertaining. it has a strong "Lord of the mysteries" vibe so if you are a fan, this book will be right in your alley. characters are well designed and not shallow. Plot is well thought and complex. The only con is the English which is not perfect, otherwise this would deserve a 5/5.
So I read until it was no longer free for a reference point. Didnt see any kingdom building up to that point and Del as a character didnt really grow just got money to buy gear. I would imagine going through enough trauma would change his character in some way. Grammar needs improvements. Like saying she when talking about cassander and other minor errors. Also have not seen why stat points matter when he just uses a firearm. Wish you luck with your story
this is interesting...i’ve already done with the 6 chapters and im kinda into it, the way you personas and character interacts and all its worth the read :) but for the action part you can improve it, and i know you can do it :)
to put it bluntly. it's absolute trash. don't be deceived by name and synopsis. it's just another Chinese novel with lots of young masters and face slaps. author says mc is 30, but mc acts like a 16 year old teenager. As far as the character development. what characters? apart from typical mc everyone is just the default typical young masters. almost all characters and sometimes even the names are the same. author deliberately tries to weaken mc every time. you can find this in almost every Chinese novels and most of them do a great job if they are all same. idk why this has so many 5 star reviews but many novels are doing better job even with same young masters face slaps.
long novel short - mc has treasuure trove of knowledge left by his father.
- mc didn't have strong allies but ridiculously strong enemies.
- expect a young master face slaping almost every chapter and for no reason
- mc has plot armour and power of will.
- the end
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Hi there!
Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more!
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Good luck for writing!
This was doing great, a little inconsistent with the Mc’s backstory but everything else was good. the only problem is that you dropped it, if you continue i will update to 5 stars.