Elvlin
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Imma drop this srry....There are ALOT of problems hereImma just state a few 1st if he sealed himself he should have alot of resources in his ring that can heal him easily since he was at the so called apex of the cultivation world2nd if he was unsealed because of a calamity doesnt that mean he would have no chance if there was a calamity? Given the current state hes in3rd If he was sealed that would have mean he should still have his amazing powers ._.Thats all cause if i continue i might drown u guys with the issues.......(not kidding)Welp definitely a nope for me if u guys still want to continue its up to you...*dont take offense author this is.based on my view*
I started this novel after reading the description and till the first 30 chapter it was quite good, though their was few problems. But overall it was nice. But when MC saved Official Tian, which was completely forced situation, as if MC having split mind disorder . Otherwise why would you someone unrelated and take huge danger, when you are trying to hide yourself. Also through out the whole story MC remains undecided whereif he wants to reveal or hide is ability. Later the story situation becomes more fawed and forced. Like Xiao Li got saved and enters academy, then come back but unable kill again return to academy leaving a challenge. Even though he could easily prove MC was the one with devil skill, thus proving he saved Tian. There are also many situation where MC acts different to his specific character. So, allover there are many forced plot and MC kept behaving differently. I never found any mature vibe that there should have been as he was atop class doctor. Never I found any smartness when dealing with situations, which should have been present. So though author started well,now it is becoming trash.
I'm honestly enjoying it so much, the author has potential and his novel too, the romance between the girls and the mc is evolving in a healthy way so far, even though there are some warmer moments they are being used very well as a foundation for building from the girls' romance with mc, it's pretty cool to read, I'm enjoying where all this is leading, looking forward to meeting the new generation of the sect and also to see the older mc, hope when he gets older he won't be far away from mom for a long time as I'm loving her character so far and waiting for her personality to evolve with mc.I'm looking forward to what's next: D
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it’s called character development give it time and he will change this makes the story more enjoying to read rather then have an op mc with an op system and is a super giga ultra instinct chad with intellect and cunning that make all the worlds smartest and most political politicians look like retard
It starts off promising the MC has a dice that increases/decreases luck. It starts off fine, but quickly makes me sigh. All the world famous works are gone and now he can find a way to exploit that. The idea of a lucky dice in itself is promising, there was no need to turn it into a stereotypical novel.
Love it! Very well written, the characters have depth, and the world is interesting and unique! I'm very intrigued by the MC and I cannot wait to read more and learn his history.
I read the novel after watching 2gether for like 5th time. I watched 2gether series few years ago. I watched it again few days ago. I never thought of reading the novel. but I'm glad I did. I love the novel. I think I like novel more. ❤️
Worth a read..... if the plot is executed decently.... .let's hope its selected... !!!!?..................................................golden finger
Writing improves as the story progresses(grammar, vocab, etc.). A great start of the protagonist's adventure to revenge.Writer have a writing style of first person perspective, solely focusing on the main character and events happening around him including his thoughts and thinking processes.Overall, a great story.
