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:) ?. This is pretty good. Even if it has 7 chapters.
The story is interesting especially its all about mechs. In this story our protagonist can buiod and pilot a mech which is another intersting addition to the plot. It is like mech touch but the mech designer can actually pilot his creation. Still starting here hope for more chapter.
The pacing of the story is quite slow, but i do like that they harnessed a new kind of energy, The writing quality is superb and the premise is excellent overall it's a good read, Keep up the good work author! Kudos to you!
To be very honest i never really liked anything about mystery or shit about "spy" but that was only until now.. i dont know much about such stuff but one thing i would like to say is that it has caught my interest.. ima go back to reading now! i hope I'll be having a good read!!
The translation is good. But the characters are written the way a typical author from China would write: like stereotypes of races and how some are just straight out associated with thugs and the general bad crowd. It's not for everyone, not me and it's not the type of apocalyptic novel I enjoy. The first 60 chpts focus on pre-apocalypse and a little of the Apocalypse. I actually read this somewhere else. But I forgot where. Sorry. Some people like a certain genre like face-slapping etc, so some people might like this kind of book. The background and characters are similar to the "The Great Worm Lich"
I love the author's writing style and the detailed descriptions in the story. It is an interesting novel and it's plot is mind blowing looking forward to it's end.
This is a decent novel having "magic" in a modern society. Unfortunately like most such novels it suffers from some glaring plot holes. In the end I found the "trial 1" chapters to be very boring more than anything else, and coupled with the plot holes caused me to drop it at around chapter 140 even though I had been only skimming through those trial chapters.First off about the other reviews on MC and his personality. In my opinion it is quite good like a normal human, and you will have problems with that only if you prefer the psychotic MCs of modern chinese xianxia.Coming to the plot holes, the most glaring ones are those trials. Putting completely untrained teenagers, including just video gamers, in life and death scenarios in trial-0 (they would not really die though most participants don't know that) in a jungle against beasts and all is totally stupid. You will not filter out strong willed people like that, rather psychotic killers who have been killing since childhood.Also you see some upper world fellows abusing some "loophole" (though we are never told what that is) to enter the trials, yet the organizers do zilch about it nor invoke any deterrence. In other words, if not for the appearance of MC, the trials are just places for upper world fellows to cheat and sweep away, losing the whole point of the trials. The appearance of MC is also a cheat but let's ignore that.Then the second trial is even more stupid. Most participants have been training in the academy which is just regular studies, training and competitive fights but there is absolutely zero preparation for what they have in trial-1. So essentially these are again untrained teenagers put in this trial of "courage" or whatever. In real life the only result of such a trial will be creating fellows with deep traumas and unstable personalities, the kinds of which most modern armies will immediately expel.Lastly my pet peeve on such modern setups though most readers seem to prefer it. Swords, spears, bows in a super advanced Earth. Give me a break. By any standard of logic magic infused guns, snipers, explosives and all will be far far superior. Just shows lack of imagination in conceptualizing modern weapons with magic/cultivation stuff, let alone futuristic weapons. Authors seem to be just following the classic cultivation novels rather than thinking about what such a post modern setup can actually look like.
I like this story a lot. You have great skills man. I hope you become successful and entertain us with many more stories.There are few mistakes here and there. If you can avoid them you will be nothing less of a professional. All the best.
I just love it, the game is great, the characters are mostly great, and the plot is exciting. What more do we need ? 140 letters
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