PKSP School Life

I love the feel of the story so far, also feels very refreshing compared to so much of the popular stuff on Webnovel at the moment. Keep it up!

I just don't know why the MC suddenly became a simp! The whole story went downhill as he started behaving like he is a rich daddy buying women! The title of the novel and the story hardly matches and the story is very boring as it goes on. I had some expectations regarding this novel but I'm dropping this novel. It's not worth it!

The concept of the book is interesting wherein an artifact, in this case, a pen, bonds with people to grant them superpowers. The opening scene is done well too with power-hungry people searching for the pens.Though, a little proofreading/grammar check is required to eliminate the simple mistakes. Keep writing !!

Imma drop this srry....There are ALOT of problems hereImma just state a few 1st if he sealed himself he should have alot of resources in his ring that can heal him easily since he was at the so called apex of the cultivation world2nd if he was unsealed because of a calamity doesnt that mean he would have no chance if there was a calamity? Given the current state hes in3rd If he was sealed that would have mean he should still have his amazing powers ._.Thats all cause if i continue i might drown u guys with the issues.......(not kidding)Welp definitely a nope for me if u guys still want to continue its up to you...*dont take offense author this is.based on my view*

Terrible transition quality to the point it’s the same as MLT. can’t the “translator” at least prof read it? or is this just directly copy paste to google translate and then post?

This story is very good. I like the character inside, I like the plot, I like the setting, I like all the things  inside of the story. So for the author,  I hope you can increase your daily update, jia you ???