With much enthusiasm and avidity, the author presents us with an engaging story. The storyline, as well as the presentation and design of the characters throughout the story, continue to be appealing and winsome.
Sadly, I do have to add that there are a lot of mistakes concerning grammar and vocabulary - and that’s alright, everyone makes them - yet I believe it would be a pity since this work has some potential. It simply needs to be polished into the gem it might be. I truly believe that this work could profit from an experienced and/or skilled editor so that it might develop into more.
Overall, I find it to be a relaxing and engaging read, very suited for this platform. I wish you a lot of fun continuing your story.
Tiene buena trama y todo, pero es demasiado confuso y dificil de leer. Primero estaban contandole una historia y derrepente aparecio con una herida, luego de que estaban en Bravoos y despues en Poniente. Debería explicar mejor las cosas. Pero en si la tama hasta ahora es buena
Hey guys, we have some great news to share with you all! First of all, it's been exactly 2 months since we started uploading, and we're happy to announce that we've hit 100k readers! We honestly never expected our story to come this far; our original plan was just to publish what we had already written. However, receiving so many views and so much support has sparked a flame within us, and motivated us to write more, despite our tight schedules. In fact, we've completely derailed from our original story, which probably would've ended in 20 chapters, but instead plan to expand this into something bigger!Furthermore, we are excited to announce that we have been contracted by WebNovel! Being contracted was one of the pre-requisites for the competition that we're participating in, the WebNovel Spirity Awards Spring 2020, and we are very grateful for this opportunity! None of this would have been possible without features (Check out WSA Weekly #2 for an analysis of our first three chapters by our editor, Hao!) and the support of WebNovel, but of course the most important supporter of all was you, the reader!We plan to slowly amp up our release schedule to twice a week so look forward to that! Also, we realize that Riley being the only character may get repetitive, but fret not! In the future we plan for Riley to receive his very own party so stay tuned for that!As always, thank you guys for your support, and if you really like our story, please consider giving us gifts! WebNovel gives you several coins for being active, and with those coins, you're able to give us gifts, both to support us as authors, and also to support us in the competition. We'd appreciate it greatly if you do! P.S. We read every single comment and review, and work hard to reply to most of them daily, so, do give us your feedback and we'd be happy to answer them!
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First of all, hello fellow Filipino writer! You made a very realistic and vivid world here. The plotline is intriguing. This story is one of those that stood out to me the most on this website. It's not a crowd follower in a way that it doesn't center around lavish livings and romantic endeavors. It depicts reality, and has a well-written interaction between the characters. Overall, it's a gem of a work.
Okay so first off this is a combination story, so if you really want to understand everything going on you should also read the Futurani System that they made. Secondly it has very few mistakes (Like maybe one or two every 10 chapters) and it is really interesting doing a proper balance between **** and storytelling. The only thing I can possibly suggest is having two endings one for each story part (where both win and lose) That way people can still enjoy their choice of favorite.
Hi guys. It's me the author but in a different username. Why you ask? I may have accidentally deleted all the data as I accidentally reset my phone so I am sorry to tell you all that the book is gone. I cannot finish it and to be honet , I lack the motivation to start it all over again I deeply apologize to everyone.