hello people, author is here.
I am not thick skinned enough to give myself the 5/5 rating. so leaving the rating stuff aside, let me talk about my story. As english is my native language you find grammatical errors here and there, please bear with this for sometime and I will correct them in the near future. now let me talk about the stability of the updates, up till now I have to admit that I didn't released the chapters consistently, but it will not be the same from now onwards and you expect more stability from myself. that is why i rate myself with 3 stars. when it comes to story development, character design and world building I have a clear idea and I do feel like I am doing a great job and if you feel like anything is out of place and please to comment under this review.
if want any updates regarding the story please do comment here.
I hope I get more reviews for the story, so that I can know it is reaching to many people.
hope to see more reviews.
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Numbers don’t make any senses. Use Desmos to make them accurate. Plus the grammar need so work. I recommend using grammarly for that.
Awesome cant wait for more chapters to come. The main character is strong will i cant wait for her to grow. She will be the strongest when her power grow im get excited cant wait.
good novel.mc brain works, makes sense. good novel, let the author continue the novel...................................................................
The author has a creative mind. Editing and proofreading would clear away distractions for readers.
This is a extremely good book and I enjoy it greatly. The wont give any spoilers but the mc of this story is not a random human being reincarnated as a monster, he is a monster literally, through and through. I know, I know, this was stated in the synopsis and you’ve probably seen other reviews saying the same, it’s just really refreshing to have a proper monster mc… I would like to thank you Mr. Author
Additionally, I’ve heard that the author, Month, will be making a new novel soon. I’ll be sure to give it a read whenever it’s released [img=recommend]
NEED MORE! PLS DO NOT DROP THIS AUTHOR..
Honest reviews are here.. In my opinion, this novel is not that good, but it is not bad either.. The story kinda explains many things in the beginning, and it is quite confusing.. MC got betrayed by EVERYONE, which is stupid.. Then, the MC family situations are also quite tragic.. Then, the reincarnator (MC) vs reincarnator (antagonists) will be fine if it starts fair and square.. But it is not.. Antagonists got HUGE advantages..
First, this is his enemy 2nd reincarnation, while MC only experienced his first reincarnation.. Second, this guy got soooo many powerful allies even from the beginning while MC only has his MEMORIES.. So, MC will have a hard time against his antagonists and his powerful allies.. MC journey will never be smooth sailing and keep having "titanic" situations on every turn..
This is not my type of novel.. I like an OP MC without having a hard ship on EVERY occasions.. I want to enjoy reading novels, but here, you just feel annoying and frustrated.. So, won't I recommend others this novel? Well, it depends.. If you like OP MC, I won't recommend it.. As someone who loves OP MC, I cannot help but feel annoyed and frustrated reading this novel.. But to some people, if they don't mind about it, they can probably enjoy it..
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o personagem principal faz qualquer coisa por sua mulher, ele vê mulher e enlouquece, larga tudo, é francamente nojento, mas eu sempre faço uma revisão justa, isso não é tão bom
dreadful wrighting, grammer, and everything inbetween. intresting premise, but its painfull to read.