This is fuccin dragon city reference isnt it???
I think there's some error at chapter 68 because it's been said that the fl go to that certain place to buy a slave and she bought 5 of them, but they turned out to be her subordinates instead. I'm confused because they didn't talk about why those subordinates became slave, or are they really a slave? This is really confusing. Also, the translation is a bit messed up sometimes, but although there's some problems, the story is still good, like it very much
The FL should just die! This novel is extremely frustrating. The FL is useless.
Your writing has truly captivated me - it's a masterpiece! Are you considering releasing a revised edition or exploring innovative ways to share your work with a wider audience?
I think u may be my favourite author.You really know how to bring characters alive and ever changing and evolving. The world you created is stable and alive.
I've read up to chapter 600 or so and, like most of the stories here, it has potential but is wasted because everything comes too easy to the protagonist.
Does he need to evolve? wild situation happens and he goes to the next level... Does he needs money? boom, a senior gives all of his money to him, or he finds part of a sect's minnning ground and has lots of spirit sones...
The plot if filled with situations too convenient added to make him grow easily.
Ohhhhh? Well, it's pretty interesting to read about whenever The Perfect Human Project, getting little bits of infornation then and there.The previous title was The Cute Yandere Next To Me btw if i remember right
well i can say i have read worse.
but there aren't many that are worst.
about the mc in the first few chapters he is more or less afraid of woman.
because of almost R*ape in his first life. the next chapters after this rape becomes a main theme.
later when he decide he want to do somthing about it, the system forces him for *** with a rando woman.
currently chapter 56 he wants a harem because he was a neet anime manga lover.
the story arcs are short.
half of the chapters are almost filled with the system look.
at chapter 56 i'm wondering why there are so many that want more chapters.
but not me so i'm dropping this
that's a good book... but you should update more.
I have read until chapter 6 ... and I give up : boring generic and there is absolutly no transistion it's litterally :
"I need that, pouf I'm in the good location, I kill the ennemy, I got what I wanted and even more ... now I need that pouf I'm already there and repeat again".
It remind me the MMORPG where there is no global map, you just have to clic to start an instance with random players ... good for game like LoL, bad for MMORPG.
Well I only went to chap 6, maybe I'll miss a intersting story but I don't think a good story can begin with so much defects.
Aurumn has been stagnant since the author went on holiday. Pray tell when we would be seeing more on this wonderful story?! The storyline is rather quite unforgettable. Please return already!
It's not translated well after chapter 40, please can you make adjustments