Meh. Too boring, naive and insipid to continue reading. The hero and his life are poorly revealed, sometimes not realistic. From the beginning of the beta-test a line of cheats begins and- No, this is too stereotyped to continue reading.
This is a really good story and I couldn’t get enough of it when it was being released, which is why I’m super disappointed that it wasn’t updated/dropped. Please update/bring this back.(I don’t actually know whether this was dropped or not, thats why I used slashes.)
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Excellent story. Short, but entertaining!!Read this when it was being written a few years ago. The story is pretty direct and doesn't have the MC go on a constant nonstop adventure. He has a goal, he works hard to achieve it.
Dude. Love the premise so far. It’s actually fun. If you continue with this, I would suggest delving into the mystery of how he became self-aware, if there’s some higher power or fluke in the system behind it, or just develop the character in his journey of self-discovery. There’s so many things you can do with this. But you also gotta explain the chicken. What does it do, exactly? Tell us!
This is the most confusing and mindbreaking story I have ever read. I can say that the main character is well written, but there is not a lot of context to anything, where is this, what is happening, who are all these people, it's kind of all over the place and there is so much that is crammed into the story arcs, the writing will sometime make sense, but often it will tear away the semblance of understanding the reader is trying to find, I think that this is an interesting story, but it should be grounded in something, with a curse upon the land, characters that just appear without any description, it feels like there is no context built for the reader to connect to the story, and therefore one cannot imagine the world in a sense.Other than that I find it kinda fascinating, but I'm unable to read more than a few chapters at the time as it never stop giving me headaches?. I'm .still going to continue reading, but I hope at some place in the future it will make more sense, I'm not looking for a overpowered mc or a happy ending or anything, I just want to understand all the small details that is happening in the story and that it will explain what is happening. I want a story with a different mc(which it has) i want a understandable world building (which haven't appeared yet), some sort of understanding of the interactions in the storytelling process. I just hope that I can watch the story grow into a whole piece instead of short cutting into different pieces of the story without producing a suitable decisive theme for a arc, so good luck to the author, hope this can explain what I feel about the novel and hopefully I will understand it in the future and maybe give a better rating. All g in the hood and I'll try my best. So this story better be worth the time I'm going to spend on it ❤? see yall later?