The Unknown Beauty

Awesome cant wait for more chapters to come. The main character is strong will i cant wait for her to grow. She will be the strongest when her power grow im get excited cant wait.

This seems like an interesting read so I decide to pick it up.  I wasn't  disappointed since many story have something  cliche about them. But it has a good plot so I want to say keep up the good work

This needs an editor.  The story is interesting to me, but the writing quality is low.  Edit the story for consistency, grammar, and spelling. Make an appendix with the power levels, so people can look a that before the chapter where the MC explains the power levels to her new students.

Also the people other than the MC will need descriptions. Names, ages, gender and power levels are all that is discussed. In order to keep track of characters I need more than that to visualize them. Otherwise the names just blur together and I can't differentiate them.

Love it! Overall a vary good story/novel. Writing is solid with only few mistakes. Very fleshed out story, characters and world story. My only concern is with  some characters. It is hard to remember all of them. My advice for You is this: It is of great help for the author to have a notebook with all characters( their history, character, relationship, etc.). With it You can make some sort of glossary for Your novel. Then You can put it somewhere for us( readers).

It's an interesting story! I hope others love it like I do! And look forward to seeing what happens next in this very interesting and intriguing novel!  ❤❤❤❤❤ Thank you Author and translators! MORE PLEASE MORE!!!!!!

I really super enjoyed this read because of the female leads badass attitude. Especially how despite the fact that she's after a certain goal it's still not boring because there are so many other side plots that link up