Great premise excited to see where it goes I’m a binge reader so I don’t usually continue after the free chapter until we get to 500 plus and then I read about every 500 or a 1000 chapter until complete
I would highly recommend Grammerly! The free version, if you go back and put every chapter through it you should be able to fix a ton of critics opinions of the book❤️
it's not a bad story, but you need punctuation. I didn't see 1 period at all. run this through grammarly, and it will help it a lot.
The story go really good just what i expected..is it complete?!
I’m not sure how to write a good review, but I’ll try.So far the story is really good, the worldbiulding that mixes sci-fi and fantasy is well pictured and doesn’t soffucates the reader. The thing that catches most attention is the description of the places and of the scenery as it makes the reader feel like the story happens in front of him, so with touch and smell and can overall enjoy the action. The characters depicted are overall well written and interesting in their own way.The story doesn’t seem to present plotholes that won’t, or can’t, be explained later and overall the atmosphere of the book is immersive.Though I’m singing lodes of the story there are some problems such as: the massive info jumps in the first chapter. They break the action. But as I already said in the rest of the story I didn’t find any.Some grammaticals errors that makes the reader feel disoriented and characters that seem to be part of the furniture (in they way that they are there but don’t have much space or importance, like the forniture of a room).As for the story development a lot happens but I can feel that, at the moment, we’re in the tip of the icerberg of the thing that will happen in the future. So for now not many things are explained and new character will come, maybe some will be given more light, and thus my review can be changed.I don’t think there is more to say about the story apart from good read if you find it intersting and my review useful.
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Sounds like a decent alternate reality/gene based novel. MC has an internal sight ability that allows him to control his growth direction. Hopefully the authour doesn't screw it up too horribly.
Anyone know the chinese name?
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The summary would make you believe the MC was somehow abused or mistreated. I've read the prologue (which is frustratingly long and lasts 5 chapters) and nothing of sorts is happening. In fact, everyone is super-nice to him and he is the one who acts weird and extremely paranoid.
To main character, Kai, is some introverted kid with inferiority complex so deep, he flinches even when people give him compliments. He can't talk to his mother, he can't talk to his landlady and he can barely communicate with his new friends. If (on of his friends) wasn't so social and kept inviting him in, he'd probably never had any friends at all.
All along the story (as far as I read) he is complaining on an on in his head, feeling miserable for no reason, even when his friends offer him amazing adventure, he somehow twists it in his head to feel like a victim of kidnapping. Its like if you constantly hear ominous music playing in the background of his life...
Really, if something bad happens to him in the story, I would feel satisfaction. He probably deserves it at some point.
Well.....how should I put.. This is undoubtedly a trash novel.. But it's absurdly hilarious and I laughed my ass of all the time I read the novel.
Its so bad that I don't even know if I should recommend it to you guys but it's also soo good ughh.
P.S. : I read till chap 29 up till now
I expected this novel to be really fun to read. Once I read the synopsis, it immediately catch my attention. But sad to say, it failed my expectation. I don't like how the events are transpiring. It gets boring and boring for me
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