Hardy1j
no compelling story just some random side characters praising how awesome and mysterious the mc is .no proper explanation of the cheat just a brief outline . Since it takes place in modern world setting chinanumba1 sentiment will always be there and the racism. So I am out don't read this trash
This is good story, but it is little bit too fast paced for me. I think the game introduction fell short, since the start was just too fast paced that in my opinion skipped a lot stuff, so early info dumps could have been avoided, by making MC do more ingame stuff which would have let us find out about the world with the eyes of MC, otherwise good story and I like the writing quality, but slow down the pace and it will be even better one.
no raws posted, westernized characters, wrong characters name (avril/alice) in chapter 2... probably westernized trash rewrite...ffs why is it so hard to keep same character name consistent throughout the novel... probably cause author/translator doesnt care...
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This story is very interesting and also has a lot of detail in the world and the first chapter makes you intersted on where the story is going to go and the desion of the chartors and the overall indeep detail given to explain the MC motive is very good I will be sure to conture to read to see where this story goes from here
....... Muito bom, apesar de ter muitas informações, a maioria e bastante útil e realista uma coisa que falta em outras histórias, os personagens são bem desenvolvidos eo desenvolvimento do q mundo e bastante bom, apesar da sobrecarga de informações, e a inutilidade do pesonaguem a escolher como utilizar ssua abilidade desom
The first chapter had me hooked, I could not stop myself reading it. I'm not going to spoil anything for you it's up to you to read. Every word sent shiver down my spine. I kept reading just to see what happens next.
What in the world is this doing on the top novels. The way it's written is so awful, it just made me want to drop this faster and faster.Like what is wrong with the way the character talk to each others?"Finn Taylor this Finn Taylor that Yvette Larson this Yvette Larson that" like jesus christ innovate at some point. Couldn't even tell you how bad the plot is even if I tried.
Not my usual cup of tea, but I quite enjoyed it. It quite easily unfolds and makes it very easy to follow for just about anyone. I look forward to what the author can do in future chapters!
It's really good. Jus trus me. The beginning might be a tad rough but I've defo seen worse... Hidden gem right here.
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Well, it's not all that hidden tbh. All over the leaderboards and stuff. It's still good tho.
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UNIQUE!!
It is very rare to see a novel in this genre and with such an awesome story line is the rarest. The character design was at top notch and quite a number of uncommon elements like witches, sacrifices are used.
If you are looking for an unique story, this book will surely keep you on hook.
