There is this slight resemblance to legendary mechanic, but it doesn't seem bad basing from the first chapters that i have read.
I enjoyed reading this so far. The character design is nice and different, I haven't seen something to the main character in a while. Keep on going!
Needs edited by a human again. Too many wrong pronouns which at some points were 2 or 3 different wrong pronouns per sentence severely breaking up my reading enjoyment and even confusing me as to who was supposed to be saying what.
I like the story though! Keep it up!
Thank you all for your support readers. We won the Bronze Prize for the WPC. I'll be resuming my chapter publishing on the 7th of next month. Once it begins, we'll be going on a wild ride. I welcome comments, reviews and even criticisms, no matter how harsh. I also welcome encouragements. Once again, let's have a wonderful and dark read... It is about an Evil Protagonist after all.
This book got me hooked, from a good plot to accuracy of words and interesting characters which are amazing. Good job to the author.........
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One of those few hidden gems in Webnovel, in my opinion it is not getting the attention it deserves.
There are some typos, but nothing that can't be ignored.
(If you consider that it is on Webnovel, then it's hard to complain)
I like how the characters develop over time.
This story is truly amazing!!!
I have read other stories, but this story's storyline caught my attention. It is a unique one. Excited to read it.
I’ll be the first to admit I‘m not far enough in to give a proper review but there is something I want to say for potential new readers. At the beginning the characterization seems a little inconsistent. Other than that I really enjoy what I’ve read of this story and of others the author has written so I recommend giving it a try
In general, I like this work so far, but rather because there is nothing else to read from a similar genre. Good read already. However, the only thing that annoys me in this work, so much so that I decided to leave a review, is the constant limitation of the main "hero" in system points. In other words, nerf. The rest is readable. :)
it is overall a good novel and quite interesting If anyone of you guys have limited patience and can't afford to wait. Then here is the raw:曾经，我想做个好人
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