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The story is good so far! I like how you vividly narrated the story and the development was nice and steady. I love the plotline and it was an enjoyable read! Keep it going until you reach a million views and you will find it pleasing to the eyes. Characters are showed well with various emotions and I can't help but be attached to them. Kudos and your reader here. Peace ✌️

Very recommend comedy cultivation novel. Mc is transmigrated into unusual cultivation world where the face value is above everything. Actually the tittle of the novel is a bit misleading, the mc isn’t suck at cultivation it’s just his cultivation technique that too overbearing to the point he needs 3 years to reach refining realm (most basic realm) however the mc didn’t anything about how Op his cultivation technique that he cultivated *be aware this is spoiler*

His face value is too high which make heaven and earth favored him very much.

This story is full misunderstanding. Everyone thinks that mc is ready to ascend but reality is he still stuck in the lowest realm. However, his wisdom is superb that makes him gain a lot of merit and everyone regard his as a saint teacher.

Supporting characters are funny as hell especially his junior brother who always follow the mc, he is my favorite character in this novel. As for enemy, there are enemies who jealous of his destiny so they want to kill him and steal his destiny for their own good.

Anyway, this novel is a bit nasionalism but that doesn’t bother me too much. Over all this novel is good.

I'm at chapter 3. I like the gender bender concept of the story. I watched an anime before, sorry forgot the title, where the ml was turned into a girl. Lol. I love that kind of story.

This is wonderful, I'm totally in love with this book...
The plot is interesting, the style of writing is more than unique, and I'm totally hooked by the characters...
The book is already in my library, and I can't stop myself from being addicted [img=update]

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The story is great but it is being ruined by lack of seriousness from the author, writing 2 novels simultaneously  
Reducing the quality & quantity of this novel.

I started reading it and I didn't expect it to be out of my expectation. the character, the antagonist was really my type, so cool. It was really out of my expectations. however, there is some point that I don't get it. ?

I just wrote a big review and it did not save, so I'm going to cry real hard, excuse me.From the little that I have read, this novel is quite ordinary in its premise but quite promising nonetheless. World background: from the little I've seen, Author-san shows us their world and society with actions more than with long descriptions, so that's pretty nice. Can't say much about story development yet, but what I can say is that my attention was properly hooked up and I can't wait to see more from it.Character Design: I think it's a bit early to review this topic since the characters were not truly flashed out yet. However, they do feel unique and discernable from one another and not a bunch of mindless puppets.Writing Quality: It always feels a bit hypocritical reviewing this topic on stories from non-native speakers, because I'm too learning the language. There're some small typos and weird sentences but they did not compromise my reading experience. What did stand out for me were some complex( in a good way) sentences that were well made contrasting with the weird ones, but that's natural, just a bit peculiar.THE BIGGEST TOPIC: I don't know how or why, but what I can see in this novel is a lot of care and love from Author-san on writing this. They wish to share the same happy feelings they feel when doing all this and I think that's quite a good mentality. Always answering questions and engaging with readers. Suggestions: It's easy to say ' get an editor' but's not easy to do it. So here is my small type that I hope can help you. When you write on the author's note the explanation of something you felt confusing, that's a sign to go back and try redoing it. Sometimes we write something so obvious on our heads that we do not make it explicit in the text. It's a hard process to imagine what others will think when reading your text but I think it does help.Keep the good work!

I have read around 600 chapters and i have to say this noVel is very tiring to read.Scheme after scheme as if iT Does not end. The novel is a chess piece from beginning to the end His countless swords don’t even have any role in the story Each sword gives him an advantage for Just one chapter each then they are useless Mc is an underdog through and through and is always schemed upon by others and let me tell you he was schemed agaiNst from scince He was born to to till now. So yeah if this type of novel is your cup of tea then read at your own perilWhile this novel does have its moments where it Shines buT they are very Short and unsatisfYing

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I have to say that reading this brought a lot of nostalgia. It was only a few years ago that I've seen a the original charm of wuxia, xanxia, and all that.This is a throwback novel against all the system, sign-in, and overpowered stuff that is hip nowadays.It is funny that the nostalgia doesn't stop there. For people who read Machine Translations, this brings that vibe as there is still a lot of work that needs to be done with wording and all that. Spacing work needs a lot of polishing as well.I trust the author would improve on that and I could only advice to use Grammarly if he could.