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RTK is a novel that I made 4 years ago but stopped due to complicated problems and decided to rewrite it all from beginning in which now I continue to try update regularly every day
I hope everyone enjoys reading it and leave an honest constructive review like pointing out my mistakes or grammars! ✨
The novel is terrible. Continue to read if you like someone that’s a simp
You have an interesting take on storytelling but your needs to be edited further so your readers won't be distracted while reading. It's good of you to ask for feedback and I truly hope your work will get better because of those. :)
It 'd a really start ,but author got bored afterwards,so i don't recommend this book.
The storytelling is fantastic. It feels like I'm right there with Zhang Xu on the soccer field, experiencing all his highs and lows. The characters are real, and their interactions keep me hooked.This book nails the whole dedication and hard work theme in soccer. Zhang Xu's determination is seriously motivating.The soccer scenes are so well-done. They're detailed but still exciting. You can tell the author knows their soccer stuff.I'm totally rooting for Zhang Xu as he faces challenges and works on his skills. The Super Midfielder Training System adds a cool twist to the story.Overall, this book is a blast. I can't wait to see where Zhang Xu's journey goes next. Whether you're a soccer fan or just looking for a good story, give this book a shot. It's a five-star winner! ?????
The story is pretty good, strength progression is decent and makes sense. Honestly, my only problem with this fanfiction is that MC is a psychopath, he doesn't care for anyone, they killed someone with whom he had been with him in a lot of life-threatening situations, and he acts like it's just another day, I just can't help but feel disgust to him. I mean, if his reason for getting stronger is to survive, being a jonin is more than enough, let Naruto and Sasuke do everything and hide during the War.Sorry, but I can't enjoy a story without feeling some sympathy towards the MC, at least in Reverend Insanity Fang Yuan has a goal which kind of requires him to be like that, this mf doesn't.
Hello author, just found you through your comment at the "Update Daily (Or Not?)" article in inkstone. I haven't started to read, but for now i give you 5 stars for the interesting sypnosis (Little error at the start "turned actor turned magician"). I will change or not change depending on the story in the coming days or week (after I finish the novel I'm reading). Good day!
Damn is the writing style so good, this is literally cure for my eyes from all the ****ty translations and MTL novels I have been reading lately, and still am, what can you do, so many good novels but no one picks em up, but anyway enough from my useless complains, this boom is one hell of a read, would definitely recommend
Just because. Antiharasment vote. LEAVE THE..... ALONE MY LIBRARY. DONT CARE IF ITS GOOD OR BAD. GET AWAY FROM MY LIBRARY. IF I DONT PUT IN LIBRARY GET OF MY WALL.
A good and progressive beginning, development of character is moving at a good pace, the switching of tenses here and there is a small flaw, otherwise storyline is good.
lol just come but story hooked me
wow. Just Wow! this book is just so good I couldn't stop reading!
Hitomi as a character feels so relatable and watching her through the course of the chapters, from her feelings to thoughts, was just great!
Definitely A Gem of Books!(｡ﾉω＼｡)