Indian mythology; consider me in.
Even I would like to know how Vishnu ends up being the God of ailmentation. One of the most worshiped and revered god.
(It's a continuation of Previous comment which I can't edit so...) 资质 means aptitude. The translator translate it to "zi'zhi" which I don't know even know if it's a word or not. See? The translator didn't did his homework. I find it disappointing to see such a good story being getting ruined. Please don't ruin such a good story.
the story is good and the pacing is somewhat fast but i can see way too many similarities between overgeared and this
so i am hoping atleast in the upcoming chapters it won't be the same
First of all, the potential of the story is not that great. This kind of plot has already been used a lot of times, but sometimes an overused plot can still be good if added with enough spice to make the story interesting, or if the spices are different, the story might be somewhat or entirely unique to its predecessors. Second, the progression of the story is too rushed, or I might say that the author is lazy enough to make a lore or a plot for the novel. Then there's the world background, and I might say that the world background of this novel is below average. Why? Because the story is too rushed, there are a lot of things in the story that aren't explained thoroughly enough for the readers to understand, and there's a sudden drop of new information with no proper background or history for the thing to stand on its own and justify the author's decision to create it in the first place. Third, the writing quality itself is somewhat average or slightly above average because the author didn't put enough love and effort into writing this novel, and loving your work is an important characteristic of a good novel. If you just write a novel as a product, the reader must also feel that. Lastly, the updating stability is good, but quality must come before quantity. In conclusion, the only downsides to this novel are the too fast story progression, the lack of effort put into putting lore in the story, and the fact that the story is not unique enough to satisfy veteran readers who have already read a ton of novels.
Alright, I read up to give chapters and I somewhat enjoyed reading it. The premise of taking everything online was what captured my attention the most. the writing quality is good, could be better but it's much better than mine (kek) the characters are somewhat likable and the world background is good as well as the story development so far. keep it up and all the best for WSA 2022.
While needing a bit of editing, this is a really good story. The MC falls to a schemer (not so sure he has the culprits right) and has to start all over. Previously, he was the No. 1 player in the massively popular MMORPG, completely maxed and a bit bored and waiting for the new upgrade. Now, due to sponsorship penalties, he has to earn some serious cash while hiding his new player identity (there are petty people out there...). I think it has great potential and can't wait to see what happens next!
if there was something lower than one star I'd five it
so is this a NTR novel?..................
overall a great story however the quality of the translation is what is really holding it back, I would recommend this story getting an editor or something because it can get pretty hard to read at times
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Wow! An amazing read. I felt I was being carried along gently on ride reminiscent of a magic carpet ride. Thoroughly enjoyable by all standards. Well done author.