Not horrible, but also not amazing.Sentence structure is a bit jarring to read, and the statement pacing is strange. My main issue is the lack of knowledge as to how Esports works, though. It's very clear to me that the knowledge on the operation of an esports team and the players practicing habits, plus the coach, that the writer does not have any experience in the esports scene. The display of a very rudimentary and romanticized version of esports is very prevalent in this novel, and detracts greatly from the experience.
I honestly can't wait for when the mc spams kirin hahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahha I'm just dying with laughter imagining it. That was first the second being that I'm sorry but the writing is also pretty strange to me I just hope you try and read some stories of the same thing your writing and improving your writing skills will attract more people to read this fanfic. Also if possible pls allow him to achieve eight inner gates I've always wanted an mc who reincarnate as a famous Naruto character or any character in general to have the (eig) but always have been disappointed most if not all of the ff I read seldom have a mc who wishes for chakra and actually learn the (eig) that's all thx
At the Chapter 40 it's good and chichè is keep at minimum but after 40 Chapter it becomes all chichè and idiot mc. First of all he doesn't learn about this WORLD he doesn't even know abcd of this world even after 58 Chapters, he just ask his friends. as for chichè? after 40 Chapter it increasing it 100% rate. Let's see Last Chapter 50-60 he goes to find his friends guess what he is being bullied, he beat them, guess what, his big brother come, guess what he again beat them, they are going to village ,guess what they meet bandit, they reach the village, guess what village is being attack.
Fairly decent novel as of Chapter 40. Very similar to The Legendary Mechanic but not just a blatant copycat. Many very similar parts but still enjoyable.
Well admittedly I didn't really like how this story started off. It jumps right into the MC leveling up on an old character and then starting off for a new profession as a Botanist. Then the first few chapters continue to add other characters and plot points that bring up more questions and mysteries.But by the time you get to the end of the trial read there are some of the questions answered - although new mysteries are added. Either way, it's clear that author has a plan for developing this character and story in an interesting way.Finally, from a personal level I can't get enough of farming novels and it's great that so far this element (well nature at least) is still a central point to his powers. I also find the idea of secondary professions interesting, and it seems that this won't be just superficially added. But last, why am I craving for some creamy, fresh durian right now?
I love reading your book! However, I couldn't quite understand the description of the characters, the background, and there were a few grammar problems as well. I suggest some proofreading and your book will be better! I'll be adding this book to my collection to see if you do better!
I like this one ...it's the best fresh one out here....Nd pls have a request keep the reality in the like u r doin now...it's fine to that mc have power nd stuff but keep it like real nd most likely logical...Nd one suggestion to I would like since u have started a new from the start which is way better than old one ..so in this new don't just focus on one girl like I see in every novel now n then in heram which is that there's always a girl which important than other in mc eyes...which is disturbing...so pls don't make that mistake nd let the girls be unique without pointing to any importance...give the reasonable screening to every girl ...beacuse there are so many examples in every novel I read that authers just forget abt some girls nd most of them are the milfs one like 35+ ones they got in relation have *** nd after that they just won't mention them or just metion them at rendomly ...it's annoying seriously..so pls if u can don't do that... don't skip the some daily life moment with them...cause then it will feel realistic...
Really a good read.. All characters are coming to life when I read the chapters.. Really amazing... Keep uo the translation and awaiting chapters..