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This is my second novel,focused on superpowers and dark themes.
Hope you will like it!
The begining may look similar to Venom,but it's just the alien part,so no problem!
As the author of this novel I believe my book should atleast make this rating. I'm not to sure on my writing but I can definitely improve on it. The story will be focused mainly on the mc but also his rival who is an investors. They're going to be playing a game of cat and mouse and will lose to each other on many occasions allowing the mc to continuously grow. There will not be much on romance because am not a big fan of it and updates are not going to be very constant but I'll try to give mass releases ones in a while. I try to make the mc not too op and although his ability will not allow him to die he will be killed on many occasions for various reasons. I just want to promise my readers that I'll try to make the story very interesting and unique to give you guys something different from the usual. Hope you guys enjoy it and thanks for reading
Needs more sauce ........ Overall it is wholesome
I can easily say that this is a masterpiece, I even feel bad not paying for reading this I just hope more people come to know this story and read it to the end. You may not like some parts of it but it all comes together and creates something great.
Novel started out really great, took an instant liking to this novel. Is Author still gonna continue with this novel? Would be great if Author picked it up again, it has insane potential.
10/10. Definitely a lot of information to sink in and it’s written really well. Very entertaining and sure to keep you glued to your screen. Lots of interesting characters too
This is such a good and solid story. I love the characters and how the story is developing. I hope the Author can update more consistently??I truly love this story.
Haaa. Finished reading to the latest chapter and I'm stuck on a cliff again. Amazing. This is only the second time I've binged an original like this. This is a hidden gem and I'm surprised and pissed at how underpopular it is. What are you waiting for? Go start reading.
In case you weren't convinced here's the review:
Writing- 5/5
Reads like a published novel. Nothing to say here. It is a bit fast paced at parts and less detailed than your usual case-solving style novel. Written very well nonetheless. Very easy to imagine and everything is described well even with fewer details.
Plot- 5/5
Amazing so far. I usually end up predicting a lot of the plot and planting my flags, but here I had a clue in the middle of a few arcs maybe at most. Unpredictable plots but not annoyingly convoluted.
Characters- 6/5
THIS IS WHAT DID IT FOR ME.
Among the best characterisation I've seen on this site. Not just the main characters, but all of them. The three things I loved the most in this novel were
1. Levi
2. Sam
3. The interactions between Levi and Sam
Levi's monologues, dialogues, behaviour are all very fun to read.
The romance(?) is really well done. Exactly the kind of romance I like. If I had to give a comparision, it's somewhat similar to Hachiman and Yukino in Oregairu or Jo Minjoon and Kaya Lotus in God of Cooking. If you are sick of those CEO romance novels then give this unique take a read.
Overall, must read. I've read 100s of originals on this sight and this is in my top 2 favourites.
Suggestions for the author: There's nothing much I can say here.
1. In the starting few chapters there are some spelling/ grammar errors.(Very few of them hardly noticeable) Some places have comma instead of period. One place had slick blood instead of slick blonde. Couple places have wrong tense, wrong gender. I think you can fix it if you read it once :)
2. For time skips within a chapter, you can leave a gap of few more lines or draw a line with stars
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like this. It helps keep the imagination steady.
Like seriously...there's no major flaws in the novels and I can only pick on things like this :p
Please keep up the good work.
well lets start reading mtl i'm in chapter 344 it really starts looking like nonsense............................ .......................
I will just say I like the concept of after the MC is done using the system, it just a bit funny that he decided to become a father after becoming a terrifying assassin.
Gao Peng and Ye Xuan both have system to upgrade beast easily as long they have the materials for it.
Gao Peng had Merciful Liberator Zi as his first contract pet, his family centipede. Ye Xuan first contracted pet is his family elf.
When Gao Peng need materials for evolution, he ask his grandpa(later chapter), in this novel Ye Xuan ask Lin Shiru (from the start)
Gao Peng had a space sttribute Jellyfish and Treasure Seeker Mouse, in this novel Ye Xuan got a snail? that has space attribute and love treasure.
Gao Peng's Jelly fish love to sit on Gao Peng head and looks like a hat, the same with Ye Xuan snail.
If you have read Monster Pet Evolution you'll find a lot of similarities in this novel, but I like MPE more than this novel because Gao Peng character is more likeable than Ye Xuan.
Gao Peng is a lone wolf, no one to rely on except for Da Zi.
while Ye Xuan got everything from the start, and keep getting furtuitous encounter one and another.
Gao Peng pets most of them is a trash monster but he upgrade it into a strong and domineering monster, and he has emotional attachment to most of them.
Ye Xuan pet that close to Gao Peng's is only the elf Xiao Wan I think?
although this novel isn't better than MPE, I don't mind to read this in my spare time.