Sheyon
Cover: 5/5, The cover edits is really amazing. One glance and I can already tell how much effort went into.
Synopsis: 4/5. Although there are some info dumping in the synopsis, I was able to tell what's going on and what the story would be about.
Grammar: 5/5. Grammar wise, this novel is so much better than 90% of the novels in here. There aren't any sentences in this novel that would suddenly changed it tenses midway so I'm happy about this.
Writing: 4.5/5. Story wise and the writing structure is mesmerizing. I have been thoroughly impressed by author's unique way of storytelling and I can't wait to read more.
Overall: 4.8/5. Would I recommend this novel to you? The answer would be yes and you should read it to prove my review right.
MC has everything just fall into place without really needing to try at all. Not much story happening either. If you want mindless reading and you're not worried about how well the story is written then this is worth your time. Who knows the quality might pick up in the later chapters.
Chapter 53! I think I've read enough to make a review because the quality is constant
Writing quality (5 stars): There are very little grammatical errors if any. This novel is not for people who have basic understanding of English because it uses a lot of sciences although in basic level, the wording is very technical sometimes. The writing is good, the concepts fresh, the cohesion fluid and the dialogues follow the common sense of that world and sometimes are hilarious. Is impressive compared with a lot of other novels in this website
Stability of updates (5 stars): chapters daily, sometimes more.
Story Development (4.5 stars-> 4 stars because there is not .5 in WebNovel): The story is like a snowball. The first chapter you have a shapeshifter with the ability to absorb genetic code that isn't able to use the powers of that world, meaning mana, and it has social phobia. On a side note it seems to be a little broken in the head *cough*. Then we get a unique backstory telling us that the shapeshifter is 3001 years old. After that in a chain of events well put together we start knowing more about the world, the races living within, social order, power structure and more and more. I won't spoil anything but I can tell you that if you give the story time it can develop into something interesting. The reason of the minus 0.5 is that the power level difference of each realm is a little vague.
Character design (5 stars): What can I say about our beautiful, intelligent, cunning, broken murderer psychopath... She truly melts my heart *sniff*. *Chuckles* our MC is a 3000 year old being that has suffered A LOT, imagine living in a cultivation world as a mortal for 3000 years, yeah, you can go through some nasty events. Her personality although quirky she is extremely intelligent and the only times she shows her true self is with the FL named Foel. Foel entrance is not a typical one, she is slave catcher, meaning she catches people and then sells them to slavery. She is a Kudere with 450+ years behind her back. As you should have realized the main characters are Anti-hero like. Foel tries to catch our MC and well... it doesn't go well. They start in extremely bad foot by the MC forcing her (which Foel deserves for all she has done), the MC want to use her for her satisfaction but affections begin budding and well. that is how I met your mother right? The rest of the characters all have their own personalities from heroic to simply crazy, from extremely cunning to plain stupid. In short, we can see that there is a lot of work behind each character.
World background (5 stars): If you tell me to describe the World background in one word it would be Deep. You may ask, what do you mean by Deep? We start in a realm, the we are introduced to gods, angels, hellspawns an entity that gives systems to some people, different energies, paths of cultivation, races, monsters (called calamities in this novel) and more. The thing is that the cultivation realms specially the later ones are not just I gather energy and Boom breakthrough. Nonono there are challenges that must be bested and a lot more. The habitants have their own culture, because of the type of world, they are not so adverse to killing well, there have been only 50+ chapters and I can speak about all of this you can get the idea of the work behind this novel.
My personal opinion of this novel... Well, before, I tried to be objective yet you can see some personal bias so it goes without saying that I like it a lot. I hope that the author can go with this novel to the end. If you have read the review until here go read the novel. I really mean that it is worth it to at least give a try until chapter 10.
I love it so far ngl, It's so enjoyable and I really like the comedy behind it. Also the relationship between the main character and Ruby is so cool.
Very interesting story!!!
Very interesting story!!!
Very interesting story!!!
Good work author
It becomes one of favorite novel
Please update more chapter
It's me the author.
And yes!, i'm shameless enough to give myself five stars.
I'm new to writing so i hope you all would support me on this journey.
I'm hoping for your review on what you think about the book.
Constructive criticisms are allowed too.
If you like it, please rate and share too.
Also, cut me some slack if you see any typos, i'd do my best to re read the chapters after posting so i can correct any errors.
Thanks for joining me on this journey of our Godlayer's Legend.
This is a relaxing story to read. Its hard to make a charecter a god without making him too op, so I think you do a good job. Also the side charecters are pretty enjoyable. I just wish there were more chapters [img=update]
I really like reading fantasy and seriously I read all the chapters in one go. I am really looking forward for the coming chapters. Keep up the good work author ?
It is a fairly good read. The beginning of it is pretty slow and as a result can be quite the turn off. However, there is enough substance at the beginning to make it not feel like a total slog. At a certain point the MC starts progressing very fast and as a result kind of makes up for the lackluster beginning. Although there are not parts that particularly fall flat, there are some that are worse than others. But unlike other novels, you don’t need to worry about slogging through any parts. The MC does have a fairly large amount of butt-pulls and plot armor but it doesn’t impede the quality of the story too much. The world building is pretty good but there are certain parts that aren’t done well. For example, it talks about multiple continents yet the entire world is explained rather poorly. One last critique is that the power scale is unbalanced. The final level of the world has too few people and the people at the border to that level have a wide disparity in skill.
Overall I would still recommend this. Read until about the Grand Examination, if you don’t like it by then leave it.
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Did you stop writing? When will you upload more chapter please make it daily dont just give up on writing i reaaly love reading the the novel please dont stop.
"WHY" 5 STARS?!
Because it's Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God.
I Can't find any fanfic of this or just straight dropped.
I only found some of this fanfic till chapter 7 not even at chapter 10 then dropped.
SO PLEASE DON'T DROP!
