It is a really fresh and new concept It is simular to I am a Mighty Lion only a lot faster and better, I really enjoyed reading it
The story starts off well enough. Minor weird or bad points but well within acceptable levels. However the sypnosis is very misleading because his "grand plan" took 1 paragraph to unfold. And it wasmt really much of a plan.
Quality rapidly took a deep dive downwards as the story continued. English standard clearly went down sharply and characters say or do or think things in an incredibly convenient way for the sake of the plot, often acting in ways that totally disregard any resemblance of intelligence the character may have previously displayed. Author tries to use certain phrases in wrong ways or simply force them into a persons speech leading to awkard lines of dialogue or paragraphs that are impossible to read. The worse of which was when he tried to combine 2 phrases into a line: Hold your high horses.
Overall, story quality is barely average and quickly drops off into mindless territory with highly inconsistent characters.
English quality starts at proper english before rpaidly becoming a hodgepot of barely legible paragraphs, overly bombastic but meaningless lines and tottally unreadble paragraphs.
Read it if you are bored with nothing else to read between updates and you like the genre. Recommen you at least have complete mastery of english so that you can understand the pidgin gibberish this novel tries to use so often.
The title is Samsara Online, but the whole novel (1-278) is 30% in-game and 70% Gods, assassins, H-scene, etc. It's a good read, but something is missing when he explores the virtual world. I dunno what it is, but whenever I read VR-Gaming novels, I just wanna scream, omg, I want to play that, and I really don't feel it in this novel.
Wow, this novel got dropped from trial read list pretty fast despite the support, while a certain other novel about a baron or something gets picked even faster without much of a support.
Good good good, just please queue this up. It's a very good concept.
Self-Entitled Author Review.
Hello humans. This author is back with new attitude and different shit content. Don't forget to stone this book to death and bribe me a lot if you wish for more death, blood and gore. Accpeting bribes on Patreon. Special tier made for Mafia Maniacs.
Alternatively, if you ask nicely enough and become part of my Rebel Army, I can consider not sending you straight to the afterlife as a character modelled after you. Instead, I might give you delicious food and truck loads of bromances.
The choice lies with you. Do remember that there is a special place in my heart for fan creators of my work. I have almost every important social media so I want to see tags. If I like what you did enough, you might just have a chance to be featured n my eternal Youtube series.
That's it. Don't fall for me, plebeians. This Boss Bitch still have souls to shred. Until next time!
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reading the first 20 chaps and the story line feels forced and unrealistic. but i love the concept and hope to enjoy more. .
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Although it is very early to review still I must say this is super duper nice. I loved the creativeness and effort of creating the setting. The pace of the story so far is perfect.
Writing is up to the mark. Waiting for the story to unfold. :)
Good work.
I really do like the writing style and the way autor talks about everything. It feels really nice to read and I'm excited for a new chapter.
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