VERY GOOD BOOK! I always searched for a story with a strong female lead and dark romance. It's very well developed and there is always some suspense. I'm looking forward to discover the answers to the mystery??
The update speed is a little slow, but I really love this MC. Too many reincarnated MCs want to keep a low profile, but not this guy. He's the kind of guys that kills a thousand men with every step and takes zero bull crap from his enemies. I hate when I have to put up with crap from some minor villain for a hundred chapters before the MC does the needful, so this novel is really refreshing.
He's also loyal to his own and treats them well.
If I had to complain about anything, sometimes the MC seems a little stupid, but it hasn't been a problem yet and doesn't seem out of character.
What the hell is with that cover? I'm laughing my ass right now.
opppa. this is what I call an op FL. she kick ass. I am loving the face that it aint starting off slow. the amount of chapter being release is amazing as well keep up the good work
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you very much
I'm the author of this story. I would encourage all readers to give it a chance. My test readers gave me some good reviews, so I thought a larger community would also appreciate it.
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The character development in this story is so good! Really could not stop reading! It definitely ended on a cliff hanger, and I hope the author updates soon!
This storys premise is delightful except for the fact that i have no idea what is going on or what anyone saying or what theyre doing. Kid gets abducted because some people said theyd guve his parents money and hes like “sure” doesnt question anything. Then when theyre explaining there objectives within the worlds the dont feel coherent. This feels like it might continue to be a prevalent issue and while I understand that english might not be your first language I cannot reccomend this in good conscience.
Wow ! This is so hype ! I love the way you introduce you characters they have different backgrounds I am so gonna love this , I will definitely recommend this to everyone?
This is a very interesting adventurous story of children written without any grammatical errors,I appreciate the author for including the suitable literary techniques according to the story and making it more interesting and readable.
Lies were told, then it will shatter your trust. This book will bring you on the edge. It has a nice plot. So unique. Great character. Good job for the writer. Two thumbs up.
Yeet!!! I noticed some errors in grammars but nah!!! Even Grammarly and a little proofreading will remedy those!!! Story Development and pacing is just right, I think? The pacing got rushed after the 5th Chapter though. Fast-paced is different from rushed. Don't be excited to write your thoughts, that's where almost all writers rushes their works. My past work is just like that too???. Just like what Webnovel says when you're about to write, Just keep calm and write. Don't be excited or too fired up. Character designs is good and explorative, also imaginative. I quiet envy your imagination, haha. All in all this has potential, keep up the good work!!!