Hi! This is Molly, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The story isn't anything special, a guy gets a system and gets points to buy stuff that can help make him strong, like I said nothing special and nothing that hasn't been done a hundred times before. The circumstances the mc finds himself in are almost always forced and dont really flow smoothly or seem like a random occurrence at all. The grammar itself isn't bad at all but the dialogue is also forced and choppy. Overall, it's okay but dont expect something special. I'd expect in the later chapter to it basically turning into some basic cn stuff where the author is constantly making the author characters only talk about how amazing and special the mc is and face slapping that happens because of a forced circumstance.